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Luna Kamingo


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Time, it is the one thing that connects all the worlds together, as it is the one thing that all of them have in common. The Quartz, a place where time itself resides, but what happens when this place is disrupted? A young unicorn will soon find out, called by an ancient power older than time itself. A being of Wisdom taxed with the protection of not only Equestria, but everything in existence.

[I do not own the cover art if you are the artist and want me to take it down please let me know.]

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Aside from the proofreading issues, which you've already admitted to, I don't see why this has so many downvotes. I'm actually really liking where you're taking this. If you'd like, I'll sign on to be the proofreader for the story. You can PM me on here if you wanna talk about it.

It started off like any normal day. With his commanding officer yelling at all of them to get off lazy plots

Fanon speak inside story is not too good.

He said, going a little pail;

He has turned into a small bucket. Pail vs pale.

“Good night you bid idiot.”

A bid idiot is someone who overspends on ebay, perhaps you meant big.

So yeah, spelling... I like the feel of this though, it could be epic.

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