• Member Since 6th Sep, 2013
  • offline last seen Oct 3rd, 2018

MirrorShard


I'm just your everyday prince of the Changelings. Don't mind my scary look. I just haven't changed yet.

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Mirror Shard is falsely accused of stealing an ancient artifact that has turned ponies into Changelings for centuries. The exiled prince must regain the trust of his people to return to his beloved adopted mother. He knows the perfect way to do so as well, steal the Elements of Harmony before the elements are used upon Nightmare Moon. But... thing is... is there in the prophesy says there are seven elements... weren't there only six?! What the heck!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 1 )

Its a nice start. Solid writing and refined grammar make it a smooth read. The plot is interesting and the nature of the conflict is just vague enough to keep me interested. It ends on such a cliffhanger...:pinkiegasp: oh the cliffhanger. If i could advise one thing... please double space the lines so other people find it easier to read. dyslexics and similar conditions do prefer that. :pinkiehappy:

until then, next chapter!

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