There really are a lot of 20-somethings writing these aren't they? I probably shouldn't be surprised that Jack Johnson would be the first guy to have sex with a pony.
Anywho, assuming this story hasn't died a lingering death, I do look forward to more chapters if you get around to it. Sam and Jim are great fun, and the whole hashtag thing is a great setup for jokes. Princess Luna was as epic as always, though I have yet to see a story where she wasn't awesome. She kind of writes herself that way.
My one complaint was Applejack. Holy living Hell was that accent overcooked. She sounded almost as bad as Rarihick's butchering of it in "Simple Ways." At least it wasn't as bad as "Me and Mah Boe," but that isn't saying much.
Anyway take this thumb up as a symbol of my gratitude. Huzzahs!
Hahaha ! I love that fic ! A really good prequel. But what the heck with frenchies ? We don't eat ponies ! Are you crazy ? I mean... We only eat horses. 8D
The interactions of Sam and Jim are making my ribs hurt! I had friends like those once upon a time. I'd tell them they where about to do something incredibly stupid, drink, and not stop them. Reasoning: I warned the them on there own heads be it. I mean if your friends are going to do something dumb might as well get some enjoyment out of it, though warn them before hand.
Does that make me a cruel person? What I warn them? Are you saying I should be trying to stop them? Not like I had a friend who put a bottle rocket in there pants and told me they where going to light it. I warned him that it was going to hurt...and I wasn't wrong.
Good news: He didn't have to go to the hospital! Bad News: He cooked some hairs down there's if you know what I mean...
Lesson: Don't put a bottle rocket in your pants and light it thinking it's not gonna hurt...
FirstDISREGARD THISYou're quite welcome.
Also, penultimate chapter? This story is shorter than I thought it would be.
I might extend this beyond the next chapter, I'll see how it goes. ;)
3195228 If you do decide to extend it you have approval from me, i'd gladly read more if you're going to make it longer
YOLO!
Lyra having fun, of course it's going to be awesome.
Penultimate? Aw.
I thought (and was rather hoping) it would be more of a story exploring Lyra and Sam, not just a short, set-up sort of story.
Not that it wouldn't be any less good for it. I've enjoyed it quite a bit so far.
Jim right now.
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Hello Professor Umbridge.
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Very sexy and well written.
Massive ups for how you wrote Applejack, fine sir. Very groovy, I say!
I feel it went a bit too fast, I think this story could do with a slightly slower pace.
Also, Only one more chapter?
Had to unfavorite this story not because I actually disliked it, but because it kept showing up as unread in my favorites no matter what I did. Weird.
All right. Let's look at the list.
Lyra.... check.
Gentleman story.... check.
Well written.... check.
Excellent grammar.... check.
Length.... Maybe a bit MOAR
Enjoyable....
Is this story dead?
3478359 Nope, just been ill for a while. I will get back to this when RL permits, you have my assurance.
there is still lots of fun to have i guess ... and a lot of stuff to tweet/twitter/whatever about xD
Huzzah! We shall invoke the star glyph and human symbol of approval!
*likes and favorites*
We shall also pursue this story, so that We may be alerted of its conclusion through the electronic mail!
Another day, another Gentlemanverse clopfic!
Well...
There really are a lot of 20-somethings writing these aren't they? I probably shouldn't be surprised that Jack Johnson would be the first guy to have sex with a pony.
Anywho, assuming this story hasn't died a lingering death, I do look forward to more chapters if you get around to it. Sam and Jim are great fun, and the whole hashtag thing is a great setup for jokes. Princess Luna was as epic as always, though I have yet to see a story where she wasn't awesome. She kind of writes herself that way.
My one complaint was Applejack. Holy living Hell was that accent overcooked. She sounded almost as bad as Rarihick's butchering of it in "Simple Ways." At least it wasn't as bad as "Me and Mah Boe," but that isn't saying much.
Anyway take this thumb up as a symbol of my gratitude. Huzzahs!
This could use a few more chapters. I love the friendship you've built between Jim and Sam. Could definitely read some more.
Hahaha ! I love that fic ! A really good prequel. But what the heck with frenchies ?
We don't eat ponies ! Are you crazy ? I mean... We only eat horses. 8D
But still, I wonder how Luna would tastes...
The interactions of Sam and Jim are making my ribs hurt! I had friends like those once upon a time. I'd tell them they where about to do something incredibly stupid, drink, and not stop them. Reasoning: I warned the them on there own heads be it. I mean if your friends are going to do something dumb might as well get some enjoyment out of it, though warn them before hand.
Does that make me a cruel person? What I warn them? Are you saying I should be trying to stop them? Not like I had a friend who put a bottle rocket in there pants and told me they where going to light it. I warned him that it was going to hurt...and I wasn't wrong.
Good news: He didn't have to go to the hospital!
Bad News: He cooked some hairs down there's if you know what I mean...
Lesson: Don't put a bottle rocket in your pants and light it thinking it's not gonna hurt...
6022341 Glad you enjoyed. Finally back to writing this one. Hope to have chapter 4 out soon!
Ha ha, ain't that the truth. Forbidden fruit always tastes sweetest.
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Is funny because pheromones!
What? The chapter title was an innuendo? I thought they were gonna be fighting fires! Disappoint!