(My bid in the hat for the five score universe.)
Meet Ed. No he's not a talking horse, and not one of technicolor persuasion. He's a human who just so happens to work at a dead end job. But one night before bed, an odd event happens that will change his life (and the life of his manager.) for the crazier.
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Well, the first problem I notice is with the title.
The Definition of Entropy
Capitalization is important
3153379
Actually, if you understand entropy, it makes perfect sense.
great story so far. I wasnt thinking i would like it (mainly because i thought it would be about discord) but it is realy good so far keep going.
PS. TODAYS HEADLINES:man strangles team of writers over the ending of the show my little pony. he was supposedly seen running away screaming "LUNA IS BEST PRINCESS!"
3154295 thanks! I will admit that I spent nearly a month trying to figure out a way to portray a draconequus that could feasibly be banished by the 5 score curse.
3153720 glad some one caught that. I thought for sure every one would think it as a typo.
3153720 Lol, hilarity ensues.
Nice beginning. I really do like this idea, pretty original (Original for a FSDF story that is). I have high hopes that you can pull this off, just please don't let this die like a lot of other stories seem to do.
3158751 to quote ed in chapter 3 (still being written) "the fun is just about to begin!"
Entropy, Entropy, put yourself in the place of...
FUUUUUUU!
3161220 please elaborate, I don't quite get your comment.
3161331 you wouldn't, unless you'd watched a certain adventure time episode 'shudder' WORST. SHOW. EVER.
(in my opinion)
Anyway, nice story, was expecting discord, but eh, not too shabby
3162036 im getting that a lot of people expect discord but i ask you how could discord put the 5 socre / 4 curse on himself?
3162048 Well maybe he gets tired of equestria since there's no opposition and leaves to mess with the earth? oh maybe ill write my five score divided by four around that? I was Planning Celestia, but maybe...
3162074 well good luck to you i can tell you from experience that writeing from a draconequus POV is very very difficult and it will make you go
3162115 Though what do you think about a celestia one? i havent gotten much feedback for that idea
3162123 i have been reading the celestia version by sarikano so my head cannon is already set so i am not really able to say. sorry
3162138 eh its ok, guess ill let my character idea die...
and she was gonna be the president too... 
when do you think you can get a new chapter out
?(sorry for asking)
idk if i should be saying anything, but im going to edit his chapters during the weekend, so hopefully sometime around then, but idk wut hes doin
3166359 ill be handing you the next two chapters this saturday afternoon
3166308 as for you dont you know not to rush perfection?
just kidding 
i plan on makeing it a weekly update with either one or two chapters. that is if my editor can keep up
3166451 Oh, you betcha. I'll be waiting for YOU to send ME chapters. Typed on phone so no emoticon. :(
Rereading this, I seem to find more mistakes than the first time. I should be more careful. * mutters to self*
3172542 dont worry about it we can always catch em later and edit as they pop up
3172549 I know but I still get mad at myself for missing things, no matter how small
Also, First! Lol
3172561
not to many people can say that in general
I'm going to go write down the prologue for my story, I'll let u see it before it gets posted
3172596 got it
3172602 prologue is finished, ill send you the address in a PM
And so the plot has been twisted...
Looking good, can't wait till the next!
I enjoy good stories staring Draconequui.
So you're going to be altering POVs? Entropy is probably going to be the more interesting but harder to write perspective. Where's the conflict gonna come from if you have such an OP protagonist?
3294486 thanks! Yeah Entropy is definitely the harder one to write and as for conflict you'll see in the next chapter!
Well, here we go. Overall I enjoyed your fic, I did, however, come across some issues with it. First off, your transitions were confusing as hell. I was lost for most of this chapter may want to work on that.
Second, grammar. Capitalisation, missing words, lack of punctuation. The words are great, you just need to present them prettier than they are now.
And touch screens are glitchy, so ima stop here.
3344668 well i could say that it was all part of the design of the story (after all i am dealing with a harbinger of random and chaotic events) but i will admit this is only my second ever fic
so i will be attempting to go over it again soon to give entropy a make over (how do you think he would look in drag?) 
but seriously i am looking for more editors so this thing can shine
which by the way any one who wants to help can
My good friend, this story of yours has thoroughly caught my attention. It seems like that Entropy and Spaz here will be having a very interesting series of events. I have one only one thing to say to this...I can't wait!
So far, this addition to the FSDF universe looks very good and I shall be watching closely. Can't wait for the next update!
~ Super-Brony12
3162189 Small problem with the idea of any 25-curse sufferer being PotUS; minimum age for a presidential candidate is 30+. I cannot recall if it is 35 or if that's simply the record for youngest elected to the office.
I"M NOT DEAD YET! i had writers block for a long time plus work but i am now running at half steam again for this story as well as Starlight venue! i plan on posting the continueing
!
misadventures very soon as in either within the week end or the early part of mondaySo, an update? Yay. Hope the next one doesn't take as long...
3743157 its Seville Quarter a well known bar in the lower Alabama area located in Pensacola FL and to answer your question of what Entropy is depicted as wait for the next chapter it'll be there!
new cover art will be followed by a chapter very soon guys
Nice
expect a bit more consistent updating now that my life is calmed down now
also if you have any questions comments or concerns i will be here to answer them
Well not a outright bad fic... could do with more detail in places and maybe more infomation about the main characters... but other then that not bad
*gasps for breath* I'm alive! Dear sweet Celestia I'm finally FREE from those damned Finals!
On another note, back and ready to go!
No! Please stop, for the sake of all that is holy! I'm bleeding from the fourth wall shrapnel buried in my flesh.
Awww, crap. Alex lost her human memories. nice going, bozo.
Could use an editor, but it's interesting, at least.
[edit] *Reads Author's Note*
...a better editor.
I wonder if this story is dead or if the writer has plans on continuing this story.