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Arctic Wave


Man cannot remake himself without suffering, for he is both the marble and the sculptor. ~Unknown

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Mon Ami is a new pony in Ponyville. Over the years she has made and lost over 1,000 friends, learned that her parents wanted a stallion and never loved her, and that her dreams help her communicate with other ponies in Ponyville. Once she moved, she met a stallion, and that one stallion changed her life forever.

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:pinkiegasp: omg I LIKE DISS

Yo, that pony Rhiannon is you!

3225582yes Rhiannon is my personal character in the story but her name is not mine:unsuresweetie:

is this your first story?

anyway i think that your story has a interesting concept.

3296017 which is what. And no this is not my first story. The I am thunderlane and this is my story was my first but people were hating and so I deleted it cause one guy was blaming me for making dash a turd and he just made me so mad I deleted it for a pleasure of the ponies. So that is my first story and I'm not gonna rewrite it

a unicorn fichting over a pegasus that has a relation with a eath pony.
and that we are in a slightly further future.

i'm sorry to hear that there are people hating on you. story's can go what ever direction the writer wants.

3300694 Why thank you. You truly are a nice person. Inside and out. But how do you figure it was in the future?

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Twilight didn't live in the library anymore.
And Braeburn lives on the applefarm now.
so i just figured out that a little time had passed considering that Granny Smith was stil alive.
:moustache:

3303886 Oh well that makes sense. Imma turd when I write stories and I can't place a time

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everything takes practise

3318799 thank you for understanding this story. My new one just came out and had a hate comment. But that person is mean and doesn't understand it. I Mont delete it if I get another hate comment.:ajsleepy:

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alright, just finished reading your new story and those comment.
for what i know he/she (don't know) pointed out the mistakes of some line but that is the only useful thing it that whole list of his.
characters can be out of there usual play, just like the fact that a tragedy can change a person in real life. (dead of cadance)
there is indead some leak of information and your story's feel kind of rushed.
there a little comfusing for me to read probably because i'm ducht.

it you want to i'm willing to give tip's and advice.:twilightsmile:

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