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Remember kids, eat your veggies, go to school, and murder all your enemies.... I murder all my enemies....

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just wondering in the description do you mean So I began to love him, though he was not my race, instead of So I began to love him, thought he was not my race,

:pinkiehappy: LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! :pinkiehappy:

One, thank you for making a human/Zecora romance story. These are too rare.
Two, this was a very excellent story. Though I can't help but feel that there should be an extra part where they actually make love for the first time.
Also, there was one mistake. In this part,

Kissing around my quivering lips, he traveled upward, giving my petal one last loving lick before he ruthless attacked my sensitive nub, gently gumming and sucking the bundle of nerves as my eyes crossed.

you wrote that he travelled upward to get to her clitoris. Since she is standing over him it should have been travelling downward. Going upward would take him to her anus.

Anyway, something is telling me that the flower is going to be an illegal substance.

Lack of Zecora clopfics is disturbing...

Thank you for making this one! And with human, no less!

I agree, we need more Zecora fics!

There really isn't all that many fics that center around Zecora, so Reading this fic was like a fresh breeze.

Ok. I liked this, the main guy acted disturbingly similar to me on a regular basis. But! LANNISTERS!? I didn't know Equestria was a neighbor to Westeros.

That was so FUCKING awsome and beautiful my friend! Sure there was some minor mistakes but who cares! Most stories are about just having sex with a beautiful pony from the mane six or other characters besides zecora. All just one night stands no romance but just fucking and I just hated some of them for it. But this story showed more romance in the end then all the other stories so I give you a lot of credit for this story and hope you can write more.

And with this flower torn asunder

Now, I haven't read this yet, so this is just a guess.

But is this metaphor for a torn hymen?

Finally a Zecora fic and it's a just a bonus that it's good.

I liked how you got around the whole rhyming thing, that shit is difficult. :eeyup:

This was my favorite part.

I may not look it, but back in Zebricy, I was the funniest one in my tribe. If you remind me I’ll tell you the one about the lion and the hyena later…

The punchline is the douche bag lion turned the hyena into the 3rd Reich and when all was said and done the hyena and its brethren tore the lion limb from limb.

Okay, that reasoning why Zecora rhymed? Love it.

She completely missed the link between Rhyme and Romance.

Do you sell samples of this plant? It should be named salty belle.

Well done! Outstanding. It's been a pleasure to work with you.
I was just about to ask whatever became of this fic when I saw it in the featured box.
At the moment, we are featured box buddies, and I expect that you will soon surpass and succeed me in the top slot.
Very well done. I'm damn proud we got this thing here.

I did enjoy this Zecora fic, but for me rhymes just make it stick.

At first when I saw the human tag, I thought this would be gross, but I decided to read it anyway, just because I love Zecora so much.

This.
Was.
Bucking.
Adorable.

:heart:

one word to describe this:
EP.IC!!!!!!!!!!!!!:twilightsmile::scootangel::rainbowkiss::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::flutterrage:
:twilightblush:

How about a Human X Diamond Dog story

So you are also going to attempt a human/Cadance story. Awesome. More people need to try that. Especially since Zam proved that it could be done very well. Looking forward to it.

As for who could be next, I can think of a lot of characters that don't get enough love, and pairings with human characters.

Bon-Bon.
Sweetie Bell. Aged up of course. Seriously though, why does Scootaloo get all of the love. Of the three she is the most annoying.
Diamond Tiara. Again, aged up.
Fluer de Lis.
Lightning Dust.
Fem Sombra.
Gilda.
Princess Platnum. That would be interesting to see. A story set in Pre Equestria.
Flitter and/Cloud Chaser. So far I have only seen them paired with each other, or either Thunder Lane or Rumble.
Pinkie Pie. Of the mane six she seems to get the least amount of love. At least from what I have seen.
A fem dragon. I only know of four stories with a human/fem dragon pairing. Yours being one of them.
A fem diamond dog.
Little Strongheart, or another fem buffalo. This one I think would be very interesting.
And Mayor Mare.

That is all I can think of for now.

Hey what about a human and Photo Finish that is one I have NEVER seeing a clop

dude Eris first man then fem dragon then fem Dimond dog

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Real romance, or pointless clop?

3149894 ... pointless clop. But is was good pointless clop :rainbowlaugh:

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Yeah. While those are okay, an actual romance story with a human, and Bonnie as the pairing would be better. Those pretty much don't exist. There is only one, and while it is cute it could have been more.
And she needs some real love. Too bad most of it goes to Lyra, the fourth most over rated pony in my opinion.

3149966 Very true. And I'm tired of Lyra too.

3149674
They want the family jewels

If you remind me I’ll tell you the one about the lion and the hyena later…

Well? It is later...


Also So adorable :) glad someone allowed Zecora to have her 'fun'

Boy, I wished I was under those covers

Doesn't sound something Zecora would say. More appropriate would be, "Goddess, I wished I was under those covers."

Can you imagine that I'm getting stuck while reading this, because I keep getting distracted by Zecora not speaking in rhyme? I'm just so used to it (and I remember how hard it was to do when I put her in my own fic) that it just feels wrong when she talks normally.

Lyra.

Yes, she is popular and may seem overused, but her fanon personality is usually dumbed down too much to an obsession that is only played for laughs. I am confident that her commonly agreed on traits can be shaped into a decent and believable character.

Photo Finish :rainbowwild: never seen one

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Too bad he is asking for hardly used characters.

I lol'd at "this is the hypest shit ever"

Missed the sex tag but idgaf so I'll keep reading.

"The plant must have used a massive amount of calories transforming my penis."

...god

What 4 inches + what?!?!? Sounds cancerous......

You don't have to compare yourself to Zamairiac, you both write great stories.

Oh and for my personal suggestions:
Male Anon x Photo Finish
Male Anon x Little Strong Heart
Male Anon x Mayor Mare
Female Anon x Donut Joe
Female Anon x Iron Will because there barely if any female anon characters.

3149697
I agree with almost everyone of this person's suggestions.

3151039
Who do you nkt like from my suggestions?

3151196
She too much of a bitch for you? In a story set when they are teen-agers, or adults she could have become nicer.
Eh. Despite her character I like her. What I don't get is how apparently Silver Spoon is more popular.

OK, it's obvious we must open an import/export company to Equestria, and get metric shedloads of this flower to Earth as soon as physically possible...

>>Uncouth

I am writing a mature/sex fic with Lyra and Bon Bon It's called Call of the wild and you can read the first two chapters here:- http://www.fimfiction.net/story/128898/call-of-the-wild

If you like it leave me a comment and i'll get more of it made,

3150601 Leroverse Lyra is awesome :pinkiehappy: If you are into clopfics and hasn't read Xenophilia, do.

This is the first of your stories I've read, and I must say, I am impressed. Good story, good build-up. I have to say, the sex scene seemed like one of the more romantic ones, focused more around the characters showing love towards each other, rather than just fucking. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Also, assuming you haven't already done one, I would suggest a Human X Princess Luna or Human X Discord fanfiction. While plenty of Human X Luna have been done, I'd like to see a Discord story.

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probably get fedex and the best boats there are because im going to the ship shit out of ponies and that flower like crazy

I like this
Im going to give this fic a- WAIT A MINUTE
WHEN DID I-oh...
...Oh my
It appears I have given this fic a thumbs up before even realizing it

You should fix your source link :moustache:

Vinyl Scratch. Famous musicians who often travel claim loneliness. The worst offenders fall into drug and alcohol abuse.

3149966

There is only one

Which one?

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