just wondering in the description do you mean So I began to love him, though he was not my race, instead of So I began to love him, thought he was not my race,

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

One, thank you for making a human/Zecora romance story. These are too rare.
Two, this was a very excellent story. Though I can't help but feel that there should be an extra part where they actually make love for the first time.
Also, there was one mistake. In this part,

Kissing around my quivering lips, he traveled upward, giving my petal one last loving lick before he ruthless attacked my sensitive nub, gently gumming and sucking the bundle of nerves as my eyes crossed.

you wrote that he travelled upward to get to her clitoris. Since she is standing over him it should have been travelling downward. Going upward would take him to her anus.

Anyway, something is telling me that the flower is going to be an illegal substance.

Lack of Zecora clopfics is disturbing...

Thank you for making this one! And with human, no less!

I agree, we need more Zecora fics!

There really isn't all that many fics that center around Zecora, so Reading this fic was like a fresh breeze.

Ok. I liked this, the main guy acted disturbingly similar to me on a regular basis. But! LANNISTERS!? I didn't know Equestria was a neighbor to Westeros.

That was so FUCKING awsome and beautiful my friend! Sure there was some minor mistakes but who cares! Most stories are about just having sex with a beautiful pony from the mane six or other characters besides zecora. All just one night stands no romance but just fucking and I just hated some of them for it. But this story showed more romance in the end then all the other stories so I give you a lot of credit for this story and hope you can write more.

And with this flower torn asunder

Now, I haven't read this yet, so this is just a guess.

But is this metaphor for a torn hymen?

Finally a Zecora fic and it's a just a bonus that it's good.

I liked how you got around the whole rhyming thing, that shit is difficult.

This was my favorite part.

I may not look it, but back in Zebricy, I was the funniest one in my tribe. If you remind me I’ll tell you the one about the lion and the hyena later…

The punchline is the douche bag lion turned the hyena into the 3rd Reich and when all was said and done the hyena and its brethren tore the lion limb from limb.

Okay, that reasoning why Zecora rhymed? Love it.

She completely missed the link between Rhyme and Romance.

Do you sell samples of this plant? It should be named salty belle.

Well done! Outstanding. It's been a pleasure to work with you.
I was just about to ask whatever became of this fic when I saw it in the featured box.
At the moment, we are featured box buddies, and I expect that you will soon surpass and succeed me in the top slot.
Very well done. I'm damn proud we got this thing here.

I did enjoy this Zecora fic, but for me rhymes just make it stick.

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At first when I saw the human tag, I thought this would be gross, but I decided to read it anyway, just because I love Zecora so much.

This.
Was.
Bucking.
Adorable.

one word to describe this:
EP.IC!!!!!!!!!!!!!

If you remind me I’ll tell you the one about the lion and the hyena later…

Well? It is later...

Also So adorable :) glad someone allowed Zecora to have her 'fun'

Boy, I wished I was under those covers

Doesn't sound something Zecora would say. More appropriate would be, "Goddess, I wished I was under those covers."

Can you imagine that I'm getting stuck while reading this, because I keep getting distracted by Zecora not speaking in rhyme? I'm just so used to it (and I remember how hard it was to do when I put her in my own fic) that it just feels wrong when she talks normally.

I lol'd at "this is the hypest shit ever"

Missed the sex tag but idgaf so I'll keep reading.

"The plant must have used a massive amount of calories transforming my penis."

...god

What 4 inches + what?!?!? Sounds cancerous......

OK, it's obvious we must open an import/export company to Equestria, and get metric shedloads of this flower to Earth as soon as physically possible...

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probably get fedex and the best boats there are because im going to the ship shit out of ponies and that flower like crazy

Damn, nice story.
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I love it this much.

Loved it!! Keep up the good work.n

can someone spot me a rhyme for my growing erection?
because i suck at making them.

>calling Twilight "purple smart"
>herb enthusiast
>huge dick
>hot zebra sexxing

perfect story 10/10

Cute.

i loved this

This is hilarious, because if there are foals and death and toilets and monsters and hell, why not have the Forest Of Evil cripple its victims by turning them into lust crazed plant humping drones. Makes up for lack of bees?

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hahahahah cool story man i love this

That a best Herb Sugar Belle thing will need for Human.
But Great story...

shouldn't zecora have come from zebric...a, instead of zebricy? other than that, it was a wonderful story. I love stories featuring zecora. she is such a lovable character. I wish there were more stories featuring her.

For medical reasons

*snort-chuckle* Right

i just love story's with Zecora, not enough of them in my opinion

stayclassy