I am annoying with puns, I confuse people, I make people laugh, and I make people cringe and cry with my pitiful jokes.
Punfusion Iron-Knee, an odd pegasus from the deep south, has made his way to Equestria. With his companion, Map, he will meet new friends, new rivals, and finally interact with beings other than punguins. Not to mention he will probably confuse ponies on the way.
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Not bad, though you may want to put the puns in bold or italics to make it obvious that they are deliberate and not simply writing errors.
Also, even though the unusually short chapter lengths seem to work for this particular story, there will be people who will downvote this based on the chapter length alone without even bothering to read it. Just something to keep in mind.
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Thank you for your advice. I originally intended on italicizing the puns, but then I thought that would put too much emphasis on them and take away from the story not that there is much a story anyway... , and that one of my goals in life is to confuse everything I see. now about that length... ooh a butterfly
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I will attempt to write a chapter each day.
3103133 I actually just edited it right as you posted the comment. Why? because I realized both Rarity and Applejack were busy at that moment. my most sincere apologies also PUN PUN PUNNNNNNNN
3108909 maybe...
Huzzah Punfusion now has a new enemy to face. Not fighting anything not listed in the SRD.
This is such a funny fic! Love the puns!
3171988 why tank you. Unless you are not a vehicle for war in which case tank you.