opal is a cute little white cat with green eyes. she has six owners so she can have six dinners. the ponies in ponyville don't talk to eachother so they don't know what sally is up to.
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This is spectacular! Opal is the best pet anyway so she deserves to be well fed. A like and a favorite.
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I think this ventures well into the realm of over feeding.
I read that sentence and my brain went:
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This does read like a story meant for someone about 4 or 5 years old (someone learning how to count, basically). Also, it breaks canon in half because the mane 6 definitely talk to each other. Maybe you should have started with Vinyl Scratch and the others and then moved to the mane 6. Or just crafted your own story meant for adults. Ya know. Whatever's easier.
4610084 oopsie! thanks for noticing the stray sally! and the tag does say 'alternate universe" I don't know it was a split second thing!
4610076 thank you so much!
How old are you? This is a book of third grade?
4610233 it is a re-written children's book by the name of six dinner Sid, and I am not permitted to tell you my age. if you do not like the story then you can just leave me a dislike.
4610273 Aires543, don't let anyone bring you down. I think it is a great story.
4612988 thank you, you are very kind
4610273 I'm not saying its bad, because I did read it.
But I haven't seen this for a while.
I can just imagine if Colgate would have been one of the ponies she got dinner from. It would involve brushing after eating tartar control cat food.
5388237 ooh I should have put that in there! it would have been better if I made the background ponies the original ownrs and the mane six the ones she went to. oh well