Hold onto your hooves: It’s a fic about a girl who loves fics of people getting sucked into Equestria, who wishes she could be sucked into Equestria, who writes a fic about a girl who gets sucked into her own fic and lands in Equestria, and is sucked into Equestria; T’is written by a girl who writes fics who wishes she could be sucked into Equestria. IT’S FIC-CEPTION! I’m sorry. -_-
I got bored and inspired one day and wrote this first ponyfic on a whim. Not sure where it's going, but I think if I have fun and nudge it along naturally, it will turn out well. ^^ Expect lots of edits and crazy happenin's, and please give me any suggestions. I hope many people will enjoy it.
Chapters (2)
Was that okay? I dunno. If something just doesn't make sense, please, somepony, tell me, because sometimes my brain moves faster than my fingers can move.
Mmmkay. I'll track.
Edit: I am going to hate myself forever saying this.
F...fi...fir...first
Father I have sinned.
I'm not gonna lie. I'm jelly, much better written then I thought it would be, and even for a brony in equestria thing. Quite enjoyable! I say my dear, you have yourself a tracker.
Damn, I wish I could upload images from my iPod. I has a few that would be excellent for commenting.
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Got me hooked already
Keep it up!
249192 She's a dramatization of my mother, who is annoyingly concerned with college applications and perplexed my my bronyhood. I literally walked up to her and said "Guess what? I love My Little Pony! But the Friendship is Magic one." She looked at me funny, sighed, and said, "Sometimes I worry about you. You really need to grow up." So I said "Okay. I'll start watching what all my friends at school are watching.
" Of course she then said "No, no, that's okay." 
249237 Hey Squeaker, just as a heads up, there are a few people who are going to thumbs down your story just because its a HIE, dont be discouraged by their trollie antics! Hope to see more on this fiction too, so far its "Dashing" *Insert stupid posh laugh*
Anyway. Guud jub.
Bloody 'ell I hate those blokes that go around just down thumbin' stuff without even taking a look in on what it is they're voting on. Then again every story goes and gets them so it means as much as tripping over a crack on the sidewalk. Probably less.
Dang, I'm suppose to be making a comment aren't I?
Okay I gotta say reading your description... made my head hurt and made my eyes derp, also I'm quite positive Xzibit somewhere is laughing at me for this.
So that is why I decided to instantly read your story and I loved every word, letter, and punctuation of it. Except the spaces, I don't care too much for spaces but they're just plain necessary.
Definitely tracking and even making sure I get one of me special emails to tell me when you update so I can get gitty before I even check fimfiction.net.
249251 Thanks, and yes, I figured, judging by some of the comments I've seen in other HIEs... I gotta say, I love the things, and just due to my sense of humor this one will probably poke a little fun at the business, as in, how Violet expects events to go down.
I titled this story such that anypony who specifically dislikes this kind of thing might not bother to come just to get annoyed at me... But as we all know,
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249294 Oh yea, I make references to other Fictions and such as well. Its all in good fun and you know what? As long as YOU enjoy what your writing? Who gives a
as to what others think. Its for you, from yourself. So you should love it with all your heart no matter how much people may hate you for it.
'sides, not like your forcing them to read it... Or committing grisly sins against members of the mane cast... *Growls*...Hope to read more!
me after reading the description
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Trackedy mc.trackerson, a wonderful fic and i enjoy it entirely. Here take my st-....can't find my stars, well i guess....uh 1 sec. *shuffling through drawers*...*muffled scream*....Here, take my thumb instead
249461 now that's just distasteful... Oh well what can you do?
I really like this story. Gonna track this. Good job!
249461 I'm a girl, so it doesn't really make sense, but okay.
Good read, but I noticed at least one stumbling block. Even though it's first person, you should try very hard to refrain from using "I" to start sentences, especially in quick succession. It breaks narrative flow and generally makes it harder for the reader to, well, read. A full twenty of your paragraphs start as such (Twenty-two, if you count where you cheated with sentences broken by ellipses
) of your seventy-five total, just to give you an idea of it.
Don't let that discourage you, though, the rest of it is rather good writing. Definitely worth a thumbs up and a track.
249597 Noted! I'll see what I can do. Thankees!
I"ll track for now, and read it later.
It's nice to see a female HIE story. Most of the ones I've read are about guys who end up there, in either human or pony form.
>.< XD i was gonna write a story ALOT like this.
but this one is soo much better
tracked
249707 Oh God yea. Why are there so many military human OCs that stumble into Equestria? I mean seriously, does anyone actually like reading those? Lol
248273 when can I recive moar chapters because you have earned a track also yes I'm jelly
257002 I was gonna start to write another tonight, but I really need to go to bed, I have work in ye olde mornin'. I've got ideas in the works.
Also, the 
thing has disconcerted me for the evening... here please, for anypony who's like "huhhh?": http://holdmyhat.tumblr.com/
tracked
Finally! A human in Equestria story that isn't starring a self-pitying MALE teen brony. Tracking will commence!
Next chapter is being written! If y'all would like it to be a decent length please wait just a little longer.
Again, thankees for all the reads!
291001 I never knew there was such a demand for this kind of thing.
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of seeing those stories! A female first-person perspective on Equestria, its inhabitants, society and culture is obviously very different in comparison. First and foremost, consider how the typical (male) brony would interact with their favored pony after the whole initial introduction euphoria episode is over. I could condense it down to the words "male interacts with a female" and that alone would open the doors to overt or discreet romantic affection. It'll be much more overt if the male is transformed into a pony. Yeah, that's pretty much a confirmed romance story then. However, have it be "female interacts with female", and the sexual angle is removed (unless one or both are pining for the same sex). They'll be close friends if things go very well, and hopefully, it does 
. Love and friendship are related, but not the same, even if love can equal friendship. Get what I'm saying?
The vast majority of HiE fics feature a male (brony or not), who usually then fights some cliched evil and hooks up with one of the mane six during or after saving Equestria from a disaster. I'm frankly said sick
Then there's the whole superhero thing, which is such a disappointing cliche! Sure, some stories pull it off nicely, but most of the time it's just...
Anyway, to sum up something obvious.
Male in Equestria = Boooring!
Female in Equestra = New and exciting!
Ah, it'll be nice to have a female in Equestria story for a change. I'm looking forward to this one!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
you said in the story you hate cliffhangers, so WHY?! Please please please please PLEASE come out with the next chapter soon! 
332191 This was my spring break...
I've got part of it down, but I'll hate myself if I rush it. Don't worry, I'll stop cleaning and pretending to do homework soon. 
...
...
Things did not go as planned.
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Hey, it's no poblem. It took about two months to get the newest chapter out for my story. I really, really hope the next chapter won't suffer a tremendous delay like that.
I'm sure it won't take that long in your case . . . Right?
333296 I'll probably work on it and finish by Thursday. I have everything raring to go in my brain, but RL is just... I just don't know what went wrong!
Buck.
But don't worry everypony, I promise...
Yes, yes, scold me, but sorry... a lot of life stuff just happened. Everything seems to be fine now but my friend's family is having trouble just now so I'm putting it on hold again... shoot.
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Aw man, lucky! Last time I fell outta my chair all I got was back pain and a broken chair.
Part of this was written in class and part of it was written late at night so it is probably laden with more grammatical and spelling errors than is typical of me, but look! It exists! *drops to the floor* Hopefully I won't take more than a couple weeks at the most between chapters now that school has wound down and my world MUST be out of drama-bombs.
Also, all my formatting is lost when I copy and paste, so I'll fix that (as well as smoothing over any mistakes I made) ASAP.
looks good so far
also FIRST!!!
[technically]
I almost thought this had been forgotten! Good thing I was wrong with my worries
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406665 A STORY OF MINE IS NEVA FORGOTTEN! They're my babies.
Like I said, I should have an easier time finding time to write now, assuming I avoid the block. *shivers*
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Oh, writer's block?
407031 Eeyup. I usually don't have a problem with that kind of thing for more than a few days though, so that probably won't be much of an issue.
The funny thing is, last night I was suddenly gripped by this need to write until chapter two was finished, and this morning I woke up vaguely remembering that I'd published it and worrying "just what did I do last night," so over motivation might be more troublesome.
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I don't have motivation issues often, or any severe writer's block issues. Well, I think I have a small one, but that's nothing I can't deal with. Just have to think up a few sentences and then everything will go smoothly again. My true worries come from how slowly my fan fic's chapter seven goes through the pre-reader.
love it really do
i want to write a story too but iv been told im awful at grammar
so any way thank you for allowing me to read your work
407107 It's my pleasure to share it! I'm so glad I found this website. /)^3^(\
Even if you don't have all the things like spelling and grammar down pat, you can still be a writer. You can always do a collaboration with somepony else, or just do your best on your own and provide the frame work and ask somepony in the pre-readers group to work with you. Then if you want to you can compare your version with theirs and make note of things you need to work on. But if you have a writing bug, feed it, by all means!
406465 Never be too sure, the moment you get comfortable is the moment that life is gonna decide its time to shit on your floor. Pardon the analogy.
And as for the chapter, I don't think I have ever read a story where the ponies immediately wanted to strip us. But, I can honestly see that being a reaction. I'm glad you were able to write again, and hopefully I can follow suit. Still love the name by the way. Very 'Floral' in a sexy way... No stalking intended...
407137 I agree. I know full well that no one, least of all me, is perfect.
waiting to have my rear whooped by circumstance again soon! 
But that was the way it happened in my head and it does make just enough sense if one doesn't mind thinking about it 
so I let it through. Still waiting to be scolded by somepony for that scene though. XD
And as for my beginning, I was initially very hesitant to let the ponies meet Violet that way (I'm glad ya like her) because it is simply very awkward and embarrassing. I almost changed it because I didn't want any readers to just leave because they thought I was going somewhere kinky.
407180 "Something kinky"... Time to be weird! That would have been awesome! But, I read ALL SORTS O SHIT. So, honestly, it is nice you chose to stray from that path in specific. Not so much because I wouldent have enjoyed it (I'm creepy.) But because it would have been too soon for that kinda creepy.
Also, don't let people write your book for you, I know, coming from me who just offered advice its a bit hypocritical, but this is your story, written for YOUR enjoyment, and shared. While you should respect peoples opinions, never let what they will think of something dictate a story you want to write. Always try and write how you feel, not how others think you should feel. And, as for your story idea, feel free to shoot me a PM with the concept, or im on Skype, I can help you work through it. When I have writers block, its all im good for is bouncing ideas.
407198 Crap, I have to stop reading these in school (on my phone) you made me snicker out loud while another kid was explaining how to make a Macchiato or something.
(He works at Starbucks)
407242 Ah, well sorry... No im not, you know. I made you laugh. It may have been difficult to explain, but, im chalking that up to a victory. Now, don't go getting in trouble in school though. that would suck something fierce. Also, you ever notice how most of Starbucks stuff is not so much coffee as it is a milkshake?
407360 Indeed, though whenever possible I will order only one thing: a hot peppermint mocha with no whipped creme and a pump of caramel... *drool* the options I end up buying when they run out of peppermint are always milkshaky though.
407414 Caramel frappachino. Best, milʞshaʞe. EVER. Always so expensive though. Honestly, you can maʞe liʞe four of five for the same price of one from starbucʞs.