Batten down the hatches. Shadow's about to get the biggest dose of verbal abuse he's ever gotten in his life. Good luck buddy, you're in some deep s***.
Quake: Killed by Shadow Knight. Shadow Knight: Killed by Crystal Glimmer. Dr. Love: Fucked by every sentient being know to biology and then some. Me: Died of laughing when Dr. Love showed up talking crazy like usual.
Well, just finished the prequel to this and judging by the comments it suffers from the same problem as the last one... that being, it's a solid story but desperately needs an editor/proofreader. If I were willing to proofread and send you the mistakes in your currently released chapters and any you release in the future, would you fix them/be willing to have an editor/proofreader?
Oh boy. I feel sorry for Shadow. man this is going to bit. Great chapter by the way.
4607682 yeah, its gonna be hard to write the next chapter. Seeing how I have to make it epic, with the whole 'you killed my fathernot telling' thing.
Batten down the hatches. Shadow's about to get the biggest dose of verbal abuse he's ever gotten in his life. Good luck buddy, you're in some deep s***.
Quake: Killed by Shadow Knight.
Shadow Knight: Killed by Crystal Glimmer.
Dr. Love: Fucked by every sentient being know to biology and then some.
Me: Died of laughing when Dr. Love showed up talking crazy like usual.
4609909 Dr Love: *shashes your door down with his hoof* 'here's brownie!'
Oh Lovey Dovey you so crazy.
Death by Snu Snu!!!!!
4679742 pretty much yes,
Might need to change that rating to mature or put a warning on the chapter name.
Well, just finished the prequel to this and judging by the comments it suffers from the same problem as the last one... that being, it's a solid story but desperately needs an editor/proofreader. If I were willing to proofread and send you the mistakes in your currently released chapters and any you release in the future, would you fix them/be willing to have an editor/proofreader?