a reunion indeed! Been far too long. Also, with Crystal (mostly) ok with her father's death, does that mean Shadow is gonna come right out and admit he was the one who had to kill her father?
4561580 Shadow is deeply thinking on telling her, as the story goes on and he had yet to tell her, it will chew on him which you shall see in later chapters. I am still thinking if he tells her or she finds out. Either, you never know how it will effect the two.
4562439 Oh I know exactly how it (should) effect them and I absolutely hate that trope >.> Although... if it's a case of she knew all along and was just waiting for him to come to terms with it knowing that when he finally did he'd tell her... that wouldn't cause a shitstorm of easily prevented drama.
Unless of course the goal is to write Crystal out...
...but in all honesty there's so many ways that this could go that it's devilishly hard to list them all out. I just tried to but 2 paragraphs in I realized I had still left a crap ton of holes and alternate developments that change things quite a bit.
4564102 Lol I believe you have forgotten that's a trait of eragon13666's stories (obviously this is the first update in nearly a year).
I don't know how he does it, but honestly with English this kinda broken I'm amazed it's even readable (no offence at all obviously you're not a native speaker of the Language) but really he managed to make 2 very good stories in something that should have been terrible, first time I've ever seen writing quality =/= grammar etc. Honestly by a few chapters I stopped even noticing. Pretty amazing really, I guess he has writing ability in his native language and it's just the actual English language itself that isn't the strong point because the wording and depth to his words etc isn't limited at all, nor are the characters or really just the entire story itself other than that.
Shame he doesn't have anybody to fix the grammar and wording issues up really, I'd do it but I don't know how good even I'd be at that because writing isn't my strong point x)
a reunion indeed! Been far too long. Also, with Crystal (mostly) ok with her father's death, does that mean Shadow is gonna come right out and admit he was the one who had to kill her father?
FINALLY AN UPDATE!!!
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
4561580 Shadow is deeply thinking on telling her, as the story goes on and he had yet to tell her, it will chew on him which you shall see in later chapters. I am still thinking if he tells her or she finds out. Either, you never know how it will effect the two.
4562439 Oh I know exactly how it (should) effect them and I absolutely hate that trope >.> Although... if it's a case of she knew all along and was just waiting for him to come to terms with it knowing that when he finally did he'd tell her... that wouldn't cause a shitstorm of easily prevented drama.
Unless of course the goal is to write Crystal out...
...but in all honesty there's so many ways that this could go that it's devilishly hard to list them all out. I just tried to but 2 paragraphs in I realized I had still left a crap ton of holes and alternate developments that change things quite a bit.
Wow. That is doctor love. He's a nut case. This is just going to make things better. Good luck with future chapters.
this was extremely error dense.
That ending remind me only of one movie
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4564102 Lol I believe you have forgotten that's a trait of eragon13666's stories (obviously this is the first update in nearly a year).
I don't know how he does it, but honestly with English this kinda broken I'm amazed it's even readable (no offence at all obviously you're not a native speaker of the Language) but really he managed to make 2 very good stories in something that should have been terrible, first time I've ever seen writing quality =/= grammar etc. Honestly by a few chapters I stopped even noticing. Pretty amazing really, I guess he has writing ability in his native language and it's just the actual English language itself that isn't the strong point because the wording and depth to his words etc isn't limited at all, nor are the characters or really just the entire story itself other than that.
Shame he doesn't have anybody to fix the grammar and wording issues up really, I'd do it but I don't know how good even I'd be at that because writing isn't my strong point x)