Vox is a unicorn from Canterlot, with high standards and a small heart for those who aren't close to him, but when a mail-mare from Ponyville surprises him from out of the blue, he isn't sure what to think. Love is a powerful force, and it shines through even the most unpolished of gems.
'S a bit fast paced, with a twinge of cliche but your introduction was original. Keep it up.
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Thank you! Constructive Criticism is the best kind of Criticism!