I'm a young writer with many ideas.
After she was released from her exile, Princess Luna soon realizes all her friends and loved ones were gone. Except, of course, her dear sister Celestia, and making friends isn't easy, especially if you've been trapped in the moon for a thousand years.
Yet, she didn't expect anything less, for who could ever befriend a monster?
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Man I really Hope that Luna doesn't suffer much while in her travels to get new friends
This is really good stuff man. I really want to see more of it in the future.
I almost skipped this story because it had a sad tag. I will continue to read on for now...hoping there is a happy ending and I'm able to stick around long enough to see it.
Wow. I'm surprised anyone even read this! I was afraid it would fail miserably!
I liked the story telling, but I felt the story was too short. Still, I'll give it an up vote.
About half of the story was a well done rendition of what happened in cannon (very well done actually), and the other half of it was original work. To be fair, I haven't come across many stories in the sub 3k range that attempt to do character development and pull it off. There simply isn't enough time. If it's a one shot, slice of life type of story then that can works in a sub 3k story.
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It isn't quite finished, if that's what your asking when you say it was short. I just haven't been able to update much. School keeps me busy
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Totally understandable about school. It has that tendency.
Really what I was getting at was that 699 of the 1,365 were new story. So thats what I'm getting at when I say it was short.
Well she made her first friend, WELL DONE LUNA
I'd read it, honestly I have a hidden passion for these Luna coping with her awkwardness after being gone for a thousand years style stories.
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I second that, i like the way you write this story, maybe a bit short for my taste, but never the less i like it and would be thrilled for further chapters. And to pick you up on your ideas, i think i would be wonderful to have an interaction between Luna and Trixie.
So YES i'd very much appreciate a continuation of this
More please!
Please more. Please!!!!!!