Hoooray for next chapter. I hope you won't go with mind manipulation or just "dark magic corruption" etc. It would be far more interesting if it was just nature and psyche of Twilight. Mind manipulation and "dark magic corruption" just makes the character non existing. Is it still the same Twilight? Or just King Sombra/Dark magic that King Sombra used. And there are lots of other reasons why I prefer that it would be just Twilight's psyche.
It's quite a pleasure to help edit this for you. And I seriously wonder why this doesn't have more views, this is pretty awesome! I'm still curious to why Twilight's acting like that... as Lesson Zero showed, she seems to have some bits of psychosis all on her own... (there really needs to be a twilightcrazy emoticon.)
3236369 Hmm, I guess you'll just have to find out... 3241788 Glad you liked it! If you would be willing to help edit the next one, I'd be even more appreciative! (I agree with you on the shameful lack of twilightcrazy emote)
I can totally sympathize with getting stuck on a train from when I vacationed in Seoul, South Korea once. Rush hour there is terrifying especially the older women.
Hoooray for next chapter.
I hope you won't go with mind manipulation or just "dark magic corruption" etc. It would be far more interesting if it was just nature and psyche of Twilight. Mind manipulation and "dark magic corruption" just makes the character non existing. Is it still the same Twilight? Or just King Sombra/Dark magic that King Sombra used. And there are lots of other reasons why I prefer that it would be just Twilight's psyche.
It's quite a pleasure to help edit this for you. And I seriously wonder why this doesn't have more views, this is pretty awesome! I'm still curious to why Twilight's acting like that... as Lesson Zero showed, she seems to have some bits of psychosis all on her own... (there really needs to be a twilightcrazy emoticon.)
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Hmm, I guess you'll just have to find out...
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Glad you liked it! If you would be willing to help edit the next one, I'd be even more appreciative!
(I agree with you on the shameful lack of twilightcrazy emote)
I can totally sympathize with getting stuck on a train from when I vacationed in Seoul, South Korea once. Rush hour there is terrifying especially the older women.
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I feel ya there, getting trapped on a train in a major city is definitely not an enjoyable experience.
3244911 Of course I'm willing to edit the next one!! Truth be told, I'm willing to help edit all of them and be your editor for the full story.
Not to mention we also need a Discord emoticon. And a Luna one... and well, a lot more!