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The Fruity Cousin
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The Fruity Cousin
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Dude, that was kind of disturbing...
Well written, but disturbing nonetheless.
Might wanna put mature tag just to be on the safe side.
U can haz liek and faev form meh! :3
Speaking as a Murderer!Twilight writer myself, I must say that this is intriguing and I will be watching for updates!
Hope we eventually get an explanation as to why Twilight had that vision.
Easy to read, no glaring errors, and insane Twilight you definitely have an interesting story here and thumbs up from me.
Having intrusive thoughts Twilight? That's perfectly normal!
Now, having a compulsion to do bad thing, is a different matter.
This story makes me happy on so many levels.
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And how so?
Glad to hear it!
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I just like those type of stories I guess.
And this was some good writing.
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I'm still working on the second entry, but once I get it out there I hope it'll hold up.
Sweetness.
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Actually... is there any way I could help you?
I'd love to see this story developed further.
Hoooray for next chapter.
I hope you won't go with mind manipulation or just "dark magic corruption" etc. It would be far more interesting if it was just nature and psyche of Twilight. Mind manipulation and "dark magic corruption" just makes the character non existing. Is it still the same Twilight? Or just King Sombra/Dark magic that King Sombra used. And there are lots of other reasons why I prefer that it would be just Twilight's psyche.
It's quite a pleasure to help edit this for you.
And I seriously wonder why this doesn't have more views, this is pretty awesome!
I'm still curious to why Twilight's acting like that... as Lesson Zero showed, she seems to have some bits of psychosis all on her own...
(there really needs to be a twilightcrazy emoticon.
)
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If you would be willing to help edit the next one, I'd be even more appreciative!
Hmm, I guess you'll just have to find out...
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Glad you liked it!
(I agree with you on the shameful lack of twilightcrazy emote)
I can totally sympathize with getting stuck on a train from when I vacationed in Seoul, South Korea once. Rush hour there is terrifying especially the older women
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I feel ya there, getting trapped on a train in a major city is definitely not an enjoyable experience.
3244911 Of course I'm willing to edit the next one!!
Truth be told, I'm willing to help edit all of them and be your editor for the full story.
Not to mention we also need a Discord emoticon. And a Luna one... and well, a lot more!
Young there.
Anywho, tossing a like.
I like where this is going. Hope she kills some pony .
I'm happy to see you're still going. I hope you have less trouble with communication and other problems of life that seem to plague fanfiction writers from now on. I'm looking forward to more crazy twilight from you in the future
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Well, I'm glad that my rather belated entry has left you so elated. I'll definitely be working harder now with your certainly... motivational gif.
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Thank you very much for your kind words. And don't worry, Twilight has only just entered the rabbit hole.
Yay update finally it was a nice chapter as usual id say 5 out of 5 derpys
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Why thank you!
3850536 This is certainly intriguing. When is next chapter?
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I'm afraid I can't say. Between school and other obligations, there isn't much time to work on this. I do try to work on this whenever I can, but still, I really can't say. Though, thank you for your interest in it. I hope you enjoy it.
There we go, there's the Title Drop!
4256345 And I do. Hey want to check out my story Ace Combat: Divided Feelings?
I don't mind at all with you deciding to make it not just about the gore, but at the same time I can't wait until some real gore happens rather than just Twilight's imagination. Hope to see more whenever you get around to it!
I am so very glad you've decided to make this about Twilights mental state as opposed to standard "Twilight decides to kill everyone because it's fun!". Honestly, I wouldn't have stuck with this story for so long if it hadn't been for the fact that Twilight is so very in character with her response to her imagined actions. I came in expecting a standard gorefic and instead got a fascinating character study and mystery wrapped into one. In fact I'm kind of hoping the gore stays mostly in Twilights head - Twi dealing with her own personal demons just makes for a more interesting story in my opinion.
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Sure, I'd be happy to.
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Thank you for your kind words! I'm glad you've enjoyed the Itch so far, and I hope you find the following chapters enjoyable as well. And also thank you for describing the fic as a character study - I certainly never thought of the fic in that way.
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Well, I hope I don't disappoint!
So, it's a psychological backlash for her blocking out the itch?
Yay more crazy Twi! I'll admit you've got me scratching my head about where it's all leading. I originally thought this would have Twi straight up murdering somepony, but its defied my expectations so far (which is perfectly fine). I enjoyed how you mixed in actual show events with everything as well. I look forward to more!
Still just as deliciously ambiguous as ever.
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Well, that is what Twilight suspects it could be, but as for what it really is, I'm not in a position to say...
This fic is delightfully dark. Can't wait for more.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
And now Twilight is just step away from real murder.
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Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
Yes I was disturbed to answer your question, but isn't that how I'm supposed to feel? In any case, this story is still enrapturing and I look forward to more!
I can't say I was uncomfortable about the whole beating snips and snails to a pulp, I enjoyed every second of it
. This might be the first instance of blood being drawn outside of a hallucination even if it's just Twilight's. Every chapter you put out adds to the tension of when Twilight might finally snap and I'm completely looking forward to more.
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Well, I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far! And I think you'll enjoy where it'll be going...
DEATH.
Now it's getting unnerving. But that's good.
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Okay, backing away slowly...
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Well, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
TODAY IS THE DAY WE ALL DIE
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....What?
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Glad to see this progress, though I wonder if her horn and by extension her magic is related to the itch...
Almost thought dash took a shot at her when she was targeting caramel, but raining toolboxes is legit too...
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I'm glad you're enjoying it! And of course raining toolboxes are a plausible occurrence, they happen all the time!
I expected alot from this chapter but this THIS exceeded those expectations keep up the amazing work