Princess Luna was banished to the moon for one thousand years. Unbeknownst to everyone, save the descendants of Star Swirl the Bearded, Luna's most faithful servant, her captain of the guard, has been asleep these thousand years past as well. Now that Luna has been freed, so to is her servant, who must find his place in this new world he has awoken to.
Concept, and most of the first two chapters by Luna's Servant. Find the original here: All Alone Rest assured that once you pass the second chapter, this story takes on a life ALL its own.
Special thanks to my husband for editing and cover art.
Chapters (6)
>the forest did was forests will do
grammatical error, it should be "the forest did what forests will do"
you weren't kidding when you said they took completely different directions hahaha. a very interesting take on all of this and I will look forward to seeing your version evolve. I love the coverwork. I have been trying so hard to get a good picture of Cloud Twist but everytime I try it just doesn't seem right, I could never get the color scheme right. as for his cutie mark, what is that in the picture? wings?
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Grammar error fixed.
His cutie mark is a tornado, thus "twist," and it has two wings behind, coming out of it. I'm not really sure why my hubby and I decided on that, but we did. It seemed to fit. I spend a couple of hours on a pony generator trying to come up with how I thought he might look. Then hubby took that design and actually drew it out for me with Luna and all. It's SO great! I love his work. Especially when he's working for me.
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I see, I always pictured his cutie mark as being a heart-shaped shield. I know his name is Cloud Twist but their name does not necessarily reflect what their cutie mark will be.