Becoming fearful of Princess Celestia, Discord decides he needs to take action. What exactly that action will be is unclear.
Please leave feedback/constructive criticism if you so desire.
Becoming fearful of Princess Celestia, Discord decides he needs to take action. What exactly that action will be is unclear.
Please leave feedback/constructive criticism if you so desire.
And then Rarity cried for hours.
Pie war. The best kind of war.
There should be a comma after "Celestia".
3013284 I pie you now.
3013295
Do you even pie?
3013350 Of course I pie, shuddap! *Throws pie at you then runs off, laughing like a maniac!*
3013284 Fixed, Thank you.
yay pie! I pie you pie we all pie for pie pie!
I liked it. I just read a sad one, and needed a happy one. This did the trick thanks!
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Cute
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!
Awesome! Hilarious! There are no words!
(Review for the Villains of Equestria Feature Folder)
Very sweet and a bit creative for such a simple concept.
The grammar and punctuation need a bit of work, but the overall story is well made.
If you need some help, I could help you fix the errors scattered across the story. I won't be open all the time due to the semester, but I could find a time to assist you.
Ahaha! When I realized they were having a pie fight I nearly fell into stitches! Great job! True to Discord's personality as well as hilarious!
HOLY (buysomeapples!) I totally fell for the "red liquid" bit!
Awesome and hilarious