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A Sequel to A Dream, A Bow, and a Letter

Olive Branch moves to Ponyville, attempts to make friends, and helps to solve one of the great catastrophes that seem to happen on a semi-weekly basis.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 9 )

Please provide any critique/criticism/feedback if you so desire. Have a nice day. :pinkiehappy:

Ehh you just switched spike with your OC changeling and skipped half of episode :/ I hoped for some originality but uhh

“Don’t be silly Twilight, nopony could be such a meanie mean mean-pants after one of my parties. It just isn’t statistically possible!”

*cough* Gilda *cough, cough*

Oh, wow. All you did was introduce a changeling OC that replaced Spike in the Crystal Empire episodes. [sarcasm]How original![/sarcasm]

well at least you didnt have Olive Branch going on about his 'Precious':facehoof: very few beings could do what is needed when handed that much power

Could have been better. It’s not tribal but if you’re going to pull a switch like that it would need to be well done. Enough so that people won’t hate you for side-lining Spike.

olive brach should be voiced by barricade from transformers the game

i just have to put this here:

Someone's gone love drunk with power.

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