Fallout 4 is consuming my life. Please send help in the form of Nuka Cola and food supplies.
This is a tale of two world-weary travelers on the run from their past.
They know they cannot run forever. But do all roads truly lead home?
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Second story... Yay!
So, this is just something I threw together during an assignment. Originally, it was only a few hundred words of reflective mess, but people seemed to like it... So, I ponified it and posted it here...
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huh...
Jaysus, what a start. I like it, gets straight to the meat; two ponies on a journey to nowhere. Lets see where this takes them
3925792 Is that a good "huh" or a bad "huh"? You've got me worried to an extent.
They story definitely starts out very interestingly enough, but if I may be blunt, everything seems to be happening very quickly. I read about four months of adventures in the span of 1,000 words. It's ok to skip long periods of time, but everything seems to happen with an odd feeling of "Got to get to the next scene!" If anything, this narrative sounds really cool, but cool your engines a bit.
3928433 Hah, don't worry, I'm planning on slowing down the pace for the next few chapters. The first two are the way they are since when I originally wrote the concept for this story it only had a 600 word limit, so I couldn't do much with it. It just worked better like this since in terms of plot, nothing really happened to warrant further exploration in the timeskip between the prologue and the second chapter.
At least he now knows which child is the favorite.
5268652 I really ought to be more clear and less gender ambiguous regarding Silver Lining... Silver is a girl. Don't know why people always just assume a character is a dude
That was sooooo good! I can't wait to read more of your works!