I gotta admit, dood... I am loving this more and more, dood.
I was actually okay with Shining Armor taking Twilight while Twilight ruts Cadance for a few seconds then when Twilight took her brother's anal virginity... THIRD PEG-LEG, DOOD!
Please keep going with Twilight's new ideal point of view... of being the Futa-Daddy of all of Equestria...not a Stallion's rectum or Mare's vaginal walls will be safe when she is out for fun, dood.
3246105 I'm glad you're enjoying my work. It took me a couple days to decide that Twilight would score her brother, instead of the other way around! I personally think their little misunderstanding is HOT!
3246309 Let me guess, dood. Twilight creates a alicorn out of books, fucks it, and helps the construct give birth to a strange Half Alicorn/Half Spell book hybrid that has limitless knowledge but is near incapable of any form of street smarts, dood?
That's be pretty neat, dood. That, turn the entire library into a pony construct and impregnate it or fuck the floorboards until it gets pregnant, dood.
You know, it would kind of amuse me if Cadance teased Shiny (with her tongue) while she was giving him those hoofjobs until he begged her to invite Twilight over again... or to reverse her efforts at preventing the extra bit~
Also kind of half-want at least a mention of her tagging a random crystal pony, just to have her comment on them being see-through and how weird it looked.
3247995 No, I already mentioned that Cadence had only known Shining Armor before Twilight. They really do love each other, and will only share that love with Twilight. When you read chapter eight (just started working on it) you will see that Twilight will always be welcome in the Crystal Empire. They may want more foals, after all! Another thing. I never thought the Crystal ponies were transparent. Aren't They just really shiny? 3248201 Scootaloo isn't really addicted, it's more that her body needed another dose of the hormones to finish her transformation. I haven't forgotten about her though. It's just that I'm in the zone, as it were with the main story!
Oh, and people have asked about Zecora. Please keep in mind that it's very difficult to write her rhyming dialog. It took me a couple of days to write and REWRITE her limited appearance in chapter two! Maybe when the whole story is complete I'll have Twilight revisit her.
3249547 I only have Twilight involving herself with ponies she already knows. She's not a little hussy, after all! LOL! It's even canon that she already knew nurse Redheart from Ponyville. This will even hold true for the train ride back to Canterlot.
I've always wondered.. if you make it with a Crystal Pony, does that mean that you basically get the hentai x-ray vision bit? Like, when you can see the cock pumping into them and then the blast and insemination? Cause.. that would be pretty hot...
3250880 Originally it was but with a less focus of a harem, dood... Just a lengthy series of one-night stands, dood. It just turned into a harem story with Twilight banging choice mares, dood.
3250978 I had to redo the Fluer sex scene and... uhh, not to be rude, but please take all conversations involving my work to the comments sections of my stories or blog posts, dood.
I don't think the author appreciates that kind of stuff in her comment section, dood.
But yea... I'm still working on it, while planning other things that I can only do AFTER I finish that story, dood.
Oh~ the whyboners~! Magnificent, that was 2 female impregnations and 1 male creampie in a single chapter... Heh, Shining sure got the tables turned on his ass! You know what? There comes a time when a person is still only halfway through a story, and would announce that it ...could... still... have a zombie-plot-twist. I'm kidding tho~ write more 'cuz I can dig it...
Let me repeat my last post with a quick cut and paste...
I only have Twilight involving herself with ponies she already knows. She's not a little hussy, after all! LOL! It's even canon that she already knew nurse Redheart from Ponyville. This will even hold true for the train ride back to Canterlot.
Do you get the clue yet? How about this.
The Great and Powerful not so Strangers on a Train
3253297 Her brother is obviously physically larger than her. I think it's quite fitting that although she is smaller, she shares the same size cock as her BBBFF. As pointed out in the story. This will make it look HUGE!
Come on already. The poor stallion is shooting blanks. I didn't have the heart to give him a little dick too! He's a very good lover that keeps Cadence sated and quite happy!
Seriously, I am not going back and rewriting what I already stated. Besides, a shemale is a character that looks and acts female, but has a penis instead of a vagina. Twilight is a futanari. She has both.
3257613 Oh, okay. I like that Twilight and her brother have virtually the same penis. It'll also save Shining Armor from wondering if Cadence thinks bigger is better!
Aw man, this would have been a perfect chance for Shining fucking Twi since he can't impregnant her! D: Or Twi be at least so nice to suck his dick, seriously. She only gets but never gives, gives in sense of her anus and vagina and mouth. Well, mouth she does but only to mares, so yeah. <_<
I loved most but that last part was not cool I don't like it he better get to take her virginity or some guy better do it soon or I I'll be pissed every thing else thow I liked
3760931 I can agree there >.> just about every story involving a Futa paints them as superior to males... I like em and such, and I 'love' 'big', but nobody has to be an asshole about it.
Also, who else thinks the feminazi's are looking for a way to 'futa up' to try and make males obsolete? lord knows i've stumbled across more than enough stories focused on such to know that there's more than enough out there that want it >.>
Being hot does not give you the right to act like you're superior to everyone else... Celestia is very mature about it afterall =P
4228320 Yeah, you can always praise someone without need to exaggerate. What will happend if someone started to make an M/M fic where all the male characters spend their time talking about how great is to have sex with someone of the same gender, because all the females are annoying, hysteric, of bossy brats, we will get a shitstorm of people getting angry.
Then you see in this story bits like this one.
Rarity gracefully moved towards the steps, with Pinkie bouncing along beside her. “Darling, that is because Twilight is a mare. No matter what else she may be, she is not some coarse stallion.”
Or this one.
Rarity reached out a hoof and patted Applejack’s flank. “Darling, just relax. You’ll thank me for this when your tummy is round and Granny Smith stops trying to talk you into marrying some oafish stallion not worthy of licking your hooves!”
Both in the same chapter.
Normally I will not complain for one comment every now and then, but having seen them almost in every single chapter, counting between them all those scenes when you can hear the female characters talking about how they were having trouble trying to avoid the horny stalions that were sniffing them for their heat, expecting to get jumped.
I gotta admit, dood... I am loving this more and more, dood.
I was actually okay with Shining Armor taking Twilight while Twilight ruts Cadance for a few seconds then when Twilight took her brother's anal virginity... THIRD PEG-LEG, DOOD!
Please keep going with Twilight's new ideal point of view... of being the Futa-Daddy of all of Equestria...not a Stallion's rectum or Mare's vaginal walls will be safe when she is out for fun, dood.
Really good chapter
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I'm glad you're enjoying my work. It took me a couple days to decide that Twilight would score her brother, instead of the other way around! I personally think their little misunderstanding is HOT!
Sweet lord, Twilight is plowing everything in sight.
You should send her on a world tour. Seeing the sights, meeting new friends, and leaving a trail of little half-alicorns of all races behind her.
EDIT: Oh, I forgot. Possible plot development: Shiny gets pregnant. Mere trifles such as gender are no barrier to Twilight Spunkle, Stud Supreme!
This gets out of hand when Twilight finally, after all these years, admits her feelings to the Royal Library.
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I vote in favor of this development.
3246309 Let me guess, dood. Twilight creates a alicorn out of books, fucks it, and helps the construct give birth to a strange Half Alicorn/Half Spell book hybrid that has limitless knowledge but is near incapable of any form of street smarts, dood?
That's be pretty neat, dood. That, turn the entire library into a pony construct and impregnate it or fuck the floorboards until it gets pregnant, dood.
You know, it would kind of amuse me if Cadance teased Shiny (with her tongue) while she was giving him those hoofjobs until he begged her to invite Twilight over again... or to reverse her efforts at preventing the extra bit~
Also kind of half-want at least a mention of her tagging a random crystal pony, just to have her comment on them being see-through and how weird it looked.
3246309 But we already have a subplot Scootaloo remember. She's becoming addicted to Alicorn semen, and will probably turn into one
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No, I already mentioned that Cadence had only known Shining Armor before Twilight. They really do love each other, and will only share that love with Twilight. When you read chapter eight (just started working on it) you will see that Twilight will always be welcome in the Crystal Empire. They may want more foals, after all! Another thing. I never thought the Crystal ponies were transparent. Aren't They just really shiny?
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Scootaloo isn't really addicted, it's more that her body needed another dose of the hormones to finish her transformation. I haven't forgotten about her though. It's just that I'm in the zone, as it were with the main story!
Oh, and people have asked about Zecora. Please keep in mind that it's very difficult to write her rhyming dialog. It took me a couple of days to write and REWRITE her limited appearance in chapter two! Maybe when the whole story is complete I'll have Twilight revisit her.
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"Scholar, where's my scholar?" the strange pony cried as she ran down the path.
"Who are you?" Twilight asked nervously.
"You don''t know me?" The pony blinked. "I make a sound like this." She opened her mouth, and the sound of pages being rapidly ruffled came out.
"You're, you're a book?"
"No, it's a much bigger word!"
"I, I don't believe this." Twilight looked at the lovely pony, and noticed that her cutie mark was an image of the library tree. "You're the library?"
"Yes, but you call me something else."
"What do I call you?"
"Sexy."
"Only wen nopony else is around!"
"We're alone now."
"Oh, we are." Twilight grinned bashfully. "Hello, Sexy!"
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I meant Twilight tagging a crystal pony, not Cadance
And transparency is up for debate. I just mentioned it because it might be funny.
Edit: You might not even have to pick an OC pony, just have it happen during the Crystal Fair and have all her friends get all sparkly again.
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I only have Twilight involving herself with ponies she already knows. She's not a little hussy, after all! LOL! It's even canon that she already knew nurse Redheart from Ponyville. This will even hold true for the train ride back to Canterlot.
I've always wondered.. if you make it with a Crystal Pony, does that mean that you basically get the hentai x-ray vision bit? Like, when you can see the cock pumping into them and then the blast and insemination? Cause.. that would be pretty hot...
Aloe and Lotus maybe? :3
is tooo much ask if you can send Twi to the Great And Powerfull TRIXIE home.
Anyway I cant wait to see who is the next prey.
3250880 Originally it was but with a less focus of a harem, dood... Just a lengthy series of one-night stands, dood. It just turned into a harem story with Twilight banging choice mares, dood.
3250978 I had to redo the Fluer sex scene and... uhh, not to be rude, but please take all conversations involving my work to the comments sections of my stories or blog posts, dood.
I don't think the author appreciates that kind of stuff in her comment section, dood.
But yea... I'm still working on it, while planning other things that I can only do AFTER I finish that story, dood.
Sorry cuteycindyhoney, dood.
Oh~ the whyboners~! Magnificent, that was 2 female impregnations and 1 male creampie in a single chapter... Heh, Shining sure got the tables turned on his ass!
You know what? There comes a time when a person is still only halfway through a story, and would announce that it ...could... still... have a zombie-plot-twist.
I'm kidding tho~ write more 'cuz I can dig it...
I think shining should have been a little smaller than Twi. I mean c'mon. Twi is alpha shemale.
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Let me repeat my last post with a quick cut and paste...
I only have Twilight involving herself with ponies she already knows. She's not a little hussy, after all! LOL! It's even canon that she already knew nurse Redheart from Ponyville. This will even hold true for the train ride back to Canterlot.
Do you get the clue yet? How about this.
The Great and Powerful not so Strangers on a Train
3253297
Her brother is obviously physically larger than her. I think it's quite fitting that although she is smaller, she shares the same size cock as her BBBFF. As pointed out in the story. This will make it look HUGE!
Come on already. The poor stallion is shooting blanks. I didn't have the heart to give him a little dick too! He's a very good lover that keeps Cadence sated and quite happy!
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Aw, just a lil?
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Seriously, I am not going back and rewriting what I already stated. Besides, a shemale is a character that looks and acts female, but has a penis instead of a vagina. Twilight is a futanari. She has both.
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Thanks Fusion. It is a bit annoying that someone came to my story page to talk about your work!
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Whoa. I was just kidding the second time.
3257613
Oh, okay. I like that Twilight and her brother have virtually the same penis. It'll also save Shining Armor from wondering if Cadence thinks bigger is better!
Aw man, this would have been a perfect chance for Shining fucking Twi since he can't impregnant her! D:
Or Twi be at least so nice to suck his dick, seriously. She only gets but never gives, gives in sense of her anus and vagina and mouth. Well, mouth she does but only to mares, so yeah. <_<
I loved most but that last part was not cool I don't like it he better get to take her virginity or some guy better do it soon or I I'll be pissed every thing else thow I liked
Words cannot describe this chapter. Guys if you wanna write a good clopfic read this for a better understanding. Holy god
this is getting annoying.
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I can agree there >.> just about every story involving a Futa paints them as superior to males... I like em and such, and I 'love' 'big', but nobody has to be an asshole about it.
Also, who else thinks the feminazi's are looking for a way to 'futa up' to try and make males obsolete? lord knows i've stumbled across more than enough stories focused on such to know that there's more than enough out there that want it >.>
Being hot does not give you the right to act like you're superior to everyone else... Celestia is very mature about it afterall =P
4228320 Yeah, you can always praise someone without need to exaggerate.
What will happend if someone started to make an M/M fic where all the male characters spend their time talking about how great is to have sex with someone of the same gender, because all the females are annoying, hysteric, of bossy brats, we will get a shitstorm of people getting angry.
Then you see in this story bits like this one.
Or this one.
Both in the same chapter.
Normally I will not complain for one comment every now and then, but having seen them almost in every single chapter, counting between them all those scenes when you can hear the female characters talking about how they were having trouble trying to avoid the horny stalions that were sniffing them for their heat, expecting to get jumped.
*sigh* when the subject of anal sex came up, I was expecting (read: hoping) that Cadence was going to get D.P.ed.
The Season 9 premiere would seem to disagree with you.