MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AHAHAHA!

Eherm....

No.

Rainbow gets raped.

No.

no...Nono NO NO NO!!!!

I will freakin' kill you..

Get my shotgun.

why rape? And the very end? Its all so weird...

Comedy tag but not funny.
Romance tag but no romance.
Rape but no Dark tag.

You suck.

Continue please. But with less rape.

A: Laughing at all the haters that came in not knowing what to expect from a CCH story.

B: Faptastic as usual.

C: Please ma'am, may I have some more? Looks like Fluttershy's up next for Twilight, and Futaloo is definitely something to look forward to as well. If you do write more, are you going to just post it to the same story? It'd make it easier to track. Otherwise, I'll probably spot it on FP first like I did this time. I might also suggest submitting it to the Clopfics and Futaquestria groups for more exposure.

Okay, many people disliked my comment. I want more CHAPTERS, not CLOP OR SEX whatever! I just want to know what if Soarin' finds out that the newly crowned alicorn Princess raped the Element of Loyalty (aka her one of her best friends) in the sky that nopony ever saw that they're mating in the sky?
Sky sex(ual intercourse) seems a bit awkward. STATE THE FACT THAT I'M ONLY THIRTEEN YEARS OLD AND I'M READING PORN OR SEX WITHOUT MY PARENTS OR ANYBODY'S KNOWLEDGE THAT DOESN'T MEAN I WANT MORE OF THE ACTUAL THING!!! GEEZ, WE FILIPINOS AREN'T THAT LIBERATED LIKE THE OTHERS (OKAY, MAYBE MOST OF US ARE NOT) BUT PLEASE! WE KNOW HOW TO CONTROL OURSELVES IN MEDIA.

* 2998621 *reaches for shotgun* here you go!

3000286 Thank you.

*points shotgun at the author*

Shit's about to get real

3000597 *pulls out smg and point at author* LET'S DO THIS!

am i a bad person for liking this? besides the misuse of the tags, i liked this story. i wouldn't mind if this became a continued story with a branch off off scootaloos life as a hermaphrodite as well.

...It needs more Flutteshy

Wow, I never got death threats because of one of my stories before!

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If I continue, it'll be about Fluttershy (shyly) trying to seduce Twilight.

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Thanks Scygnus!
In my stories, if someone grows a penis, it's every girl head for the hills! Did you see the mayhem over at FP when I posted my first "Dryden" story? This is nothing compared to that. I must say though. Nobody at FP threatened to kill me with a shotgun before. That's an exciting first!

Please stop littering my story's comment section with your little military role play. I wasn't going to delete any negative comments, but you forced me to by posting a string of nonsense that has nothing at all to do with the story I wrote. If you don't like it, please feel free to post criticism about why. Writing things like you want to raise and army to kill me, isn't criticism of the story. Oddly enough, the story is being very well received on the non-pony story sites I posted it on.

2999424 butthurt lol.

I RESPECT YR OPINION BUT NEEDS MOAR CLOP AND MORE STORY.

I... I don't even....
Uhh...
Moar plz?

3002092 Wow, real mature.
Delete the reply to your comment cuz you dont like it.
That says alot about you.

I like this. I've read some of your other work before, glad to see your style hasn't changed much, it's something I've always enjoyed.

I want to apologize for the people who feel the need to clutter up your comments section with death threats and childish behavior.

I would very much like to see a continuation.

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Of course I deleted it. It had absolutely nothing to do with my story. This isn't the role playing thread.

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Thanks EbonEye!

Loved this story on Futanari Palace. Loved it here. I definitely want to see more, though. I would love to see more of you applying your special talent to making more ponies fat and sassy. I guess now you could say she's a...pregasus.

Wow, those comments got real stupid real fast. I'm going to read this because Futatwi is nest Twi. That said, rape is most definitely not my fetish. Once more into the fray I go.

I would love to see more chapters of this, especially a Fluttershy chapter, that would make my day.

and before you guys comment about what a sick bastard i am, I happen to be a fan of Twilight's Midnight Violations, so just save it, I already know I have a perverse mind. Have a pleasant day.

Gotta say, I'm not cool with the rape scenario. But other than that I'd say this story is pretty good. Big fan of futa, and this looks like it could get interesting if you decide to continue it. But hopefully with less rape. A lot less. Like no more rape at all would be nice.

Not bad at all would love to see more of this story and personally I had no real probs with the rape scene since it wasn't violent like many of them seem to be. Tho I'm still not a big fan of it either, yours at least was a decent read and not the over the top nonsense that some other stories contain.

So Scootaloo gets to buck her friends while Fluttershy demands Twilight to buck her good. I really wonder if alicorn seed can impregnate other pony's

Downvote for crap story and characterization.

Yes, I know, just a clopfic, but that's no excuse for doing badly with the filler and excuse plot.

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Well, the way I'm writing it, Alicorn seed CAN!

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You're entitled to your opinion. Frankly, I think that the "filler" I wrote worked quite well. People complained about Rainbow being forced into it, but you are the first to just come along and say it's poorly written. I stand by the story, and am proud to say I think I did a good job.

One last thing. I bet there are people who will be glad to hear that I'm well into part two. "It's Good to be the Princes: Fluttershy Plays with Fire"

I'm happy as long as the thumbs up outnumber the thumbs down.
(It's almost a 2 to 1 ratio!)

3055601 Dash is soo Screwed.

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Yes, in chapter one!
LOL!
Here's something hysterical that was just brought to my attention. At least one person who read my story has told me via PM, that he doesn't like or read clop ever, and then informed me that he didn't like my story! D'oh! What did he expect? From what he told me, he actually skipped over the smut and just read the non-sexual parts. That would make it one SHORT story!

Why in the world would someone decide to read something when they know before they even get to the first word that they won't like it? Is it me, or is that stupid?

You're so vain, you probably think this post is about you
You're so vain, I'll bet you think this post is about you
Don't you? Don't You?

3059311 any other chapters in comming?

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Yes there is. The working title is
"It’s good to be the Princess 02: Fluttershy Plays with Fire"

what. the. f*%k did I just read?
Seriously? I didn't see a hint of romance anywhere in this.

Twilight would NOT force her friend like that - and if you're going to write a scene like that. . .
STICK A WARNING IN YOUR SUMMARY! Sorry to say but every fic I've read that involves forced participation has had some warning somewhere for f*&ks sake!

Overall pinkiesmile rating. 0 / 5

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Take a look at the right of my story synopsis. Tell me what it says under my Kim Possible avatar picture. Aside from that, these comments are chock full of people talking about Rainbow Dash getting raped. Lastly, I say that if Princess Twilight was suddenly saddled with a penis, instead of it gradually growing like it was supposed to, The Futanari Alicorn would have serious self control problems! You said "every fic I've read that involves forced participation" You admit to reading them, and now you're going to pretend that mine somehow hurt your feelings? That's pretty funny!

I added a warning since so many people were getting butt-hurt over the story! Sheesh, it astounds me that people will readily read a story about a mare growing a penis and be okay with it, but then get all bent out of shape because it wasn't all full of romance, flowers and candy! Besides, Rainbow did say that the winner gets to make the loser do whatever she wants!

I write under the name of Honey Moon. A constant theme in my stories is futanari forcibly taking what they want. In certain circles they've become VERY popular! Anypony that's curious, just PM me and I'll supply links to where my non-pony, non-fanfic, all original stories are posted.

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Take a look at the right of my story synopsis. Tell me what it says under my Kim Possible avatar picture

When I look for a warning like the one you've thankfully put in your summary, I don't look at a writers bio, I look at the summary - where the warning belongs.

You said "every fic I've read that involves forced participation" You admit to reading them

I may read them - hell go take a look at the opening chapter to "Mutual Rescue" I even write hints at it happening.
The reason I was as put off as I was is simple.

I was looking forward to reading a nice romantic fic (As tagged!) with maybe a dark element or two, then I ended up skipping most of it. I do that with other fics that deal with non-con and skip to the story itself of dealing with the aftermath etc.

The Futanari Alicorn would have serious self control problems

Problems yes. But I can not believe that Twilight would go that far, sorry but that's my personal opinion.

Rainbow did say that the winner gets to make the loser do whatever she wants!

Yeah, I somehow don't think she was anticipating this.

now you're going to pretend that mine somehow hurt your feelings?

Where did I say you'd hurt my feelings? All I asked wasthat you put a warning in the summary
(Thank you for doing that by the way)

Oh and as for the warning

"A bunch of fillies"

Nope, I don't know about the others, but I complained because there will be people who will read your fic and will be upset at the content etc. At least if you've got the warning in an obvious place - not a little dialogue box to the side - people will know in advance and have the choice to continue reading.

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The little fillies comment was not actually aimed at you. There are a couple of users who know it's aimed at them. I liked this quote. "I ended up skipping most of it." So, you actually admitted that you judged my story after skipping most of it...NICE! Would you write a movie review after skipping most of the film?

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DAMN! You like to be harsh with your answers dontcha? LOL

when I said I ended up skipping most of it I meant the forced sex part of the story. i did however read the end where Rainbow was ending up hoping for a filly (Who knows - maybe she'll have twins)

Would you write a movie review after skipping most of the film

eenope.

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Sorry, maybe that was a bit strong. I've been having PM arguments about my story with a couple of users. Oddly, everyone is fine with R-R (Rainbow Rape) on the two non-pony adult story sites I posted it. I posted it on a third just today, but it hasn't appeared on site yet. All the negative feedback is coming from here. If it gets much worse, I'll probably post the sequel only on those other sites. Well, I do have the proper warnings up now. (Went back and made the warning more polite, too) I even took off the romance link. That actually comes into play in chapter two...Sort of. Anyone reading this, be warned. My writing does stray to the dark side. I personally thought of this as comedy too. If you read one of my stories that I think of as dark, it'll probably curl your mane! "Cupcakes" is a happy stroll in the park compared to some of my guro work! This is my only MLP clop story though. All my other stories are original, and not fan fiction. I do have one very short (500 words!) MLP story that's one hundred percent rated "G" though!

This wasn't as bad as the rating made it out to be; I haven't noticed any glaring grammatical errors or whatnot.

I bet that after the initial haze of lust caused by the spell thins out, Twilight will be traumatized for what she had done to her friend

I'd gladly read a continuation

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Oddly, everyone is fine with R-R (Rainbow Rape) on the two non-pony adult story sites I posted it.

Presumably this is due to the fact that on non-pony sites, they don't know the characters and therefore have no emotional connection to them. On other sites, if they don't like rape and they find that it has rape in it, they don't care about the characters so they just go away. (Or maybe over there, everybody loves rape, I dunno.) On this site, since the readers have a pre-existing emotional connection to the characters, it makes them extremely angry.

Also, I have no idea about the etiquette on these other sites that you are posting to, but just to let you know, on fimfiction, it is generally expected that you will post warnings for things that people might find objectionable in the description. Rape is definitely one of those things. Futa is another one that I usually see called out (although you probably can get away without that explicitly due to it being obvious from the description).

If your second chapter actually does have themes, you can probably feel free to add back the romance tag when/if you post it here.

I do thank you for the warning, as off-putting as the wording is. While from reading the comments it appears you were aiming the "little fillies" comment at certain people, the way that it reads from an outside point of view is that you're saying that anyone that wants to be warned about possibly objectionable material is a little filly. Either way, thanks to that, I was able to avoid reading a fic that would have pissed me off, and you were able to avoid another person yelling at you and a downvote.

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You raised valid points Ankyo. I'm used to posting primarily on a site called storiesonline. When posting there, it is far easier to be VERY specific when tagging a story. There's a whole page of buttons to click for just about everything you can imagine. Here's an example without getting too graphic. There are buttons for if a doctor, nurse, or teacher is in the story. You can simply click "uniforms" even, if it someone like the UPS guy you're writing about. Yes, there is even a hermaphrodite (futanari) button. I'm proud to say that I made that suggestion, and they promptly added one! Once done clicking the proper settings, the story has all the appropriate tags associated with it when it goes up on the site. It makes it possible for people to zero in on a story with only content that they're interested in. Here you get only a handful (hoof-ful?) of choices like "Comedy" or "Dark", but no "Dark comedy". Being that I said right in the synopsis that Twilight was growing a penis, I figured that was warning enough about it being a futa story. I still say that although my story may have a dark element, I always thought of it as a comedy. Just so you know, I actually edited my warning and removed my nasty "little fillies" comment before you made your post. After reading your post, I went back and fine tuned the synopsis, adding a couple more lines at the end. Now it's much clearer for the reader to know just what they're in for!