And we skip the formalities and into the very heavy stuff. Nice work.

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Formalities? What are these "formalities" you speak of?

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Well the males were in a state of drunkeness which prompt that it was a half-idea of sex. The Mares took advantage of the event, with them being weak and then no clear agreement between both sides until the middle of the story.

I haven't read anything this hot in a very long while. Seriously, there was not a single part of this that I didn't like. Just... just yes.

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Hold on a sec, are you trying to tell me you need to agree to have sex?

Because my fiance and I have been living with each other for a few years now, and she takes advantage of me being drunk at least twice a month!

There are major elements of this that are based on our relationship, actually. Maternity and Striker, based loosely on us. Fancy and Fleur are based on a posh couple we are close with (exaggerated for story of course), and the Cakes are based on our neighbors, who have three kids.

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I'm very glad you enjoyed it!! Just been thinking to myself "Nothing is ever as kink filled as I like it to be..." And boom. This story was born!

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There are major elements of this that are based on our relationship

You have orgies with your neighbors?
Because, that would be kind of awesome.

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No full fledged orgies yet, I'm afraid. But our experiment with swinging, and fantasies of doing more in larger groups fuels this story quite a bit. How are you enjoying it so far?

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How are you enjoying it so far?

I'm loving it so far. I've wanted to see a story like this for a long while and you're doing a great job of it!

Also, sorry for the late post, the holidays have been kicking my ass.

Cakeswinging? Boo, not what I was expecting when this came up in the gang bang group.

Did you comment down there indicate that you are incapable of recognizing implied versus informed consent? That's an important legal matter.

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I wonder who added this to the gang bang group... Too lazy to check it out right now, I'm afraid.

Who needs consent when you're among friends? And besides, I'm sure that in a society where walking around naked is the norm, sex is probably treated much differently than it is here.

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I realize that, but you said in real life you don't respect informed consent, one of the most important aspects of interpersonal contracts. I don't care if I'm among friends. Informed consent is the norm. No one is allowed to touch me or my property without my consent. That's what leads to petty theft and those instances of folks being written on or inappropriately touched. Blanket consent is a dangerous thing for the body and property.

But that's just me. Mostly I'm upset because I love the Cakes as a couple. Breaking them up or introducing "edgy" concepts seems like an attack on them by the bourgeoise. These innocent proles are destroyed by the kinks of the upper class and their regular lives are ruined. Poor Cakes.

I guess I'm just really, really into the Cakes as a couple. They're sweet together. Heck, I'm a FancyFleur guy and I did a long series about Fleur hanging out with (platonic) friends to make herself feel better about Fancy not being her boyfriend (just her frequent date and lover. Things get better.)

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You certainly raise some valid points, and I respect your opinions even if, for the sake of keeping the flow of a sexual fantasy fueled fictional work (done by a casual writer and sexual deviant) I've decided to just roll with everyone being mutually consenting.

I apologize if you are offended or disgusted by it, but it is staying as it is. And about the Cakes, I understand exactly what you mean about them being a very innocent couple (I enjoy the slice of pony life tumblr just for that very reason) but I like to think a lot of couples in Equestria (Modern or more city-raised) are very open about sex and are less bothered about 'purity' in the household, while more down to earth families are set in strong moral beliefs and tradition.

The cakes are very open to new ideas with each other, but are only now discovering that they desire a more open sexual experience, after seeing how happy the other couples seemed to be.

Sorry I'm rambling. Been in this hospital all week, it's getting to my head

Expect a new chapter of Curious to be out before too long...

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Oh, no, I understand. It's your story and I'm just here to see it. But some things just move me to speak. Comments are there for commentary after all. And like I said, I feel strongly about the Cakes. They're about the only in-canon couple we get aside from the families of Twilight, Pinkie and Rarity, and they don't get much exposure. Here are not just a couple but a couple with a new family. The move my empathy and my protective instincts (I tend to be sensitive to attacks on suburban tropes and stability.) I am entirely incapable of u derstandi g why the first instinct of most writers is to tear them apart as if they were nothing.

But that's a personal thing. From what I read your story, while bizarrely prurient, at least has some interestig turns of phrase and nice characters.

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The commentary is more appreciated than you know, believe me. I resonate well with chivalrous characters, growing up watching the TV shows of old where everyone was nice and respectful towards each other has had an effect on my views and habits growing into an adult.

And on the subject of prurient story elements, the main reason I wrote this is because I've read too many romantic stories that are heavily character driven, but are bereft of the kinky, erotic sex I attribute to my own love life.

You really like the way I scramble my phrasing?

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I give credit where credit is due to my fellow writers. You write well. Aside from the subject I find you a good fellow. Like Bronystories. He's a good dude even after doing stuff akin to what you've got in your archive. Actually, given your attitude and good cheer you too are a cool fellow. I'd love to talk to you in any fashion, as you've probably got good ideas.

If I may be a bit egotistical I've written some romance stories with hard passion (and also fidelity, by and large.) On top of the pile "Bejeweled Love", "Crystals and Diamonds", "Bad Moon Rising", and "Every Spike has his day."

Need more chapters!!!!!!