It started out as a normal night for a marathon, a group of 6 bronies sit before the tv screen. As the characters in the TV started talking to them instead of each other, they were suddenly thrusted into the world they have known and loved; the world of Equestria.
[Disclaimers: There may or may not be non-serious chapters in this story. The human characters aren't really in a band, but one of them is a brony music-holic.
Take on a story based on ponies, and all the non-serious adventures one can come up with!
Proofread by:Dukesofhazzardftw
Chapters (10)
band of brothers references in the title except without the war (ps. sorry i just couldn't control myself)
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I wasn't aiming for that, but okay. Cool
Moar PLZ!
Dat ending was perfect
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O RLY?
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Well, he is "Faint"astic.
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Want me to update?
(Edit: I'll do it now)
Best 'First contact' ever.
No one got shot or maimed or burned or run over or drunk or mauled or..... you get it.
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Hmm. I think I can squeeze you in. HEY JOE!
Donut Joe: WHAT?
D'ya have room for another guy?!
Donut Joe: We live in a bakery. Of course we do!
Okay, looks like you're in. I'll send the next chapter somewhere next week... maybe.
Donut Joe: YOU'RE JUST LAZY!
3217533HAHA!! donut joes donuts are the best
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I'm starting the sixth chapter
3222468yay
Eh, it was good but not quite finished
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I promise to make it up next chapter. [color=transparent]Be expected to enter randomness next chapter, cause that's what'll happen...
Great Chapter! Keep it up!
From the look, this looks promising. I'll read this later.
(I have 100 read laters) [but I fav and like all of them]
[I always read 10k+ fic first]
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I await thine feedback.
3131318 Knew I wasn't the only one who saw that
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Comment on Prologue:
You mentioned that the voice are from behind him, so the 'behind him' in the second sentence wouldn't be much needed.
??????? Not sure if random or intentional...
Spelling error. It's quite ok, but fixing it would be better than leaving it there.
Comment on Chapter one:
The writing style seemed to be more casual and friendlier than the prologue.
The first contact is ummm... Something like 'shit hit the fan too' fast. But unique-ness made it stand out from other first contact, Well done.
Comment on Chapter 2:
and it made a wee lot of sense.
DUN DUNN DUNNNN really unexpected. Great job.
Comment of Chapter 3:
, but I can tolerate it if you update it really often.
This is getting shorter and shorter
Comment on Chapter 4:
Spelling error.
Comment on Chapter 5:
Another spelling error.
When did RD get a hoodie?
Comment on Chapter 6:
Short... too short... but ok, Imma deal with it. None spelling error was found in this chapter, keep up the good work.
Comment on Chapter seven:
???? I don't quite understand what's going on.
Conclusion: I'm sorry to announce this, but this is too random for me.
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It's random to a certain extent yes... but I made sure to do it slowly.
(What's with the pile of deleted comments?
)
3377421 I correct each chapter one by one. So when I finished them, they looked like spam, so I squeezed them into one comment and delete all of it.
why'd ya never send it to me
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I BLAME MY SLEEP!
I can't tell you how much I have wanted this exact thing to happen to me.
And they get it at random! I can only keep dreaming
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Everybody does at one point of their lives. Escape reality to enter their own fantasies.
mmmm
dam lol
yes yes yes
lol
lol
lol
mmmm
wised of oz he he
mmmmmm and down the rabbet hole we go lol
Pre-read assumption: This can't possibly end well...
-_- Watcher, I am disappoint...
Post-read assessment: I now understand what you mean by non-serious characters...
Score:7.7/10
Reason for score: Lack of cohesion, too many clichés, and a confusing plotline. If the story wasn't meant to be serious, you get a 10/10.
Now I feel bad for giving you a bad score...
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Why?
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Yay! It's still higher than 7.5! I passed
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Glad my efforts bore fruit
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"So... what's next?" asked John, cursing his mind for forgetting that feeling pf warmth.