Twilight had a younger brother that went missing 17 years ago after she moved in with Celestia. Now 7 years after she met her friends and brought back Princess Luna she's gonna get one big surprise.
O.k., really? Was upping the angst to this extent, really necessary? From Dark Star's history, I expected him to react to an attempted apology from his mother like that, not Celestia. You must like bashing Celestia as much as you do Shining Armor.
I don't know what to say about the end of this chapter.
I got to the end of this chapter and i just thought... what the fuck?
Twilight Sparkle is best pony
uh... the end does not look good for the future...
kinda weird writing but interesting story
Over-fucking reaction.
3058511oh btw this will have a very different ending than the one on fanfiction
Shit Just Got Real
the part were the princes tells him the truth:
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The story was barely passable up until this chapter, sorry bro, Dislike.
O.k., really? Was upping the angst to this extent, really necessary? From Dark Star's history, I expected him to react to an attempted apology from his mother like that, not Celestia. You must like bashing Celestia as much as you do Shining Armor.
Went a little overboard at the ending there bud