I feel so bad for laughing so hard at Fluttershy getting tea in her face. You nailed every single one of the girls and their character. I can read it in their voices.
I like the idea of twiblood and I love that you gave blueblood's family a good relationship. So many stories have him and his family on each others throats which to me is ridiculous at least in the case of him with his aunts and sister/cousin. I also like that you had for the most part all characters in character. The fact that Flutteshy pointing out that just because hes not the nicest stallion on the planets doesn't excuse just up and attacking him because you assume hes up to something bad with no proof was good.This seems like a friendship with benefits between twilight and blueblood,I hope it evolves into something more over time in this. I can tell pony joe is going to make this the news of Equestria tomorrow and I'm gonna love seeing both twilight and blueblood's reaction to the news next chapter.
I feel so bad for laughing so hard at Fluttershy getting tea in her face. You nailed every single one of the girls and their character. I can read it in their voices.
Loving every second of this.
Can't wait to see how this is all going to blow up.
I maintain that the "Blueblood Special" is some kind of preening technique.
I like the idea of twiblood and I love that you gave blueblood's family a good relationship. So many stories have him and his family on each others throats which to me is ridiculous at least in the case of him with his aunts and sister/cousin. I also like that you had for the most part all characters in character. The fact that Flutteshy pointing out that just because hes not the nicest stallion on the planets doesn't excuse just up and attacking him because you assume hes up to something bad with no proof was good.This seems like a friendship with benefits between twilight and blueblood,I hope it evolves into something more over time in this.
I can tell pony joe is going to make this the news of Equestria tomorrow and I'm gonna love seeing both twilight and blueblood's reaction to the news next chapter.
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Aside from replacing ("I'll have your back." Shy responded.) with something like: ("I... I'll be there... maybe?")
and Cadence answering ("Are you sure he's not adopted, dear?") with ("He is, what about it?") -interesting choice on them being family btw.
everything was perfect written in character for me and I loved it. Add 1 like.