MOAR

I know there was a buncha story before. And it was great, it really was. The placement and use of Rarity and RD was amusing and titillating. I write Dash as a bit of a tease myself so I definitely enjoyed seeing more of what I liked, however...

“My, my. For such great sport, ya do a whole lot a yackin’ and not enough smackin’, RD,” Applejack said.
Rainbow uncrossed her arms and shot a bone-cutting glare at the farmer standing over her. “Well what if I don’t want to, huh?” Rainbow smiled. “Maybe I’ll just leave you hangin’ instead.”
Applejack swung her hips one way, and swung them back the other, ‘thwaking’ Rainbow’s cheek with her rock-solid member. Rainbow sputtered and hardened her glare with a blush. Rarity snorted behind Rainbow with a dainty hand over her mouth.
“And maybe y’all forgot who you’re talkin’ to.” Applejack’s smile completely vanished. She stepped closer, nearing jabbing Rainbow’s eye with her weapon. “Think y’all can take it like Pinkie can?” Applejack took a fist-full of Rainbow hair and craned her head up. “Then get to work.”
A beat of silence. Right there, Rarity was all too certain the two competitors would start fighting. Worse, she feared she’d have to pry them off each other. Rarity fidgeted with her fingers as she gauged the athlete kneeling before the farmer.
“Tch… Jerk,” Rainbow muttered with a darker blush.
“I try,” Applejack replied.
After another beat of silence, Rainbow lunged forward.
“How in the unearthly Hell does she do that??” That was Rarity’s only logical thought.

Do this. Do this part next.

The RD/AJ interaction here was my absolute favorite part. The dominating attitude she took right there was appropriately handled without feeling forced or over-the-top. Yes. that part next. Encore.

...maybe with more cockslapping. Because that's cool too. xD

Wow you've written exactly 3,000 words

2960987 But of course.

2962247 I know, right? Applejack's always been the alpha dog to me. Just a little something I had to do

2963073 It's a gift

I'd love to read it!... But I can't... I don't enjoy anything sexual with anthropoids anymore... Sorry.

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Well... That wasn't helpful nor flattering.

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Oh sorry, where are my manners? It's good that you put something out and I agree completely with your selection of the story! I love futanari myself, and I do like the character selection and paring. Plus, you put exact 3,000 words down! That doesn't come around unintentionally every day!

Futa? You will go far here

2968471 To put this in a song:

Or, to be more fitting:

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You think so? Honestly, I hadn't the faintest idea how the fandom dug this sort of thing. I'm gonna have fun with this... Seriously.

2969106 I'll go far only with PERSERVERENCE!!