On the day of the thousandth Summer Sun Celebration, Twilight Sparkle finds out about the return of Nightmare moon and begins to worry about it. however, Princess Celestia dismisses Twilight's worries and sends her to Ponyville to oversee the preparations for the celebration and to make some friends. Once there, Twilight meets five ponies whose destinies are inexplicably tied with her own. Those ponies? Derpy Hooves, Lyra Heartstrings, Bon-Bon, Pinkie Pie, and Cloudkicker.
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What? Were you expecting someone else?
This is quite interesting. Good interesting, though. Looking forward to more!
I did not read yet. Inb4 featured. Maybe. Now lets see the quallity of this piece. Yet.
No expensive words jittered everywhere? No featured then. BUT IT FEATURES DERPY! So maybe...
interesting concept, cant wait for more
loving the story man, keep it up! im sure more people will notice it soon
yay, surprise time >:)
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Well, that's kind of the point. I'm using some of the show's dialog because 1.) It's utterly perfect and 2.) To tie it in better with the pilot episodes. I want it to feel like this could have happened in the pilot episodes if things in the episode had happened a little differently.
This deserves further investigation.
I know this isn't the same Cloud Kicker (this one appears destined for Kindness, where as Winning!Kicker would be Loyalty), but I couldn't resist...
Oh pinkie pie of course she would no what adventure time is she must have broken the fourth wall then the third wall going into adventure time
*CUE HAPPY ENDING THEME!*