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celestia sends Princess twilight Sparkle and her friends on a dangerous journey to find a wish granting creature and though the mane six are thrilled with having their fondest wishes come true, something tells Twilight that something will end up going horribly wrong!

this story features suspense, horror, mindblowing special effects, and the occasional monkey's paw reference!

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Comments ( 5 )

Intrigued I am bit agh that grammar. You seriously need a proofreader.

2929761 bro hoof to that.
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“So why exactly did Celestia want us to come here?” inquired Rainbow Dash as she flew over top of the party.
“Did someone say party!?” squealed the ever-so random Pinkie Pie

Pinkie, stop using that sledge hammer to break the wall.

You are lucky this reached 1K words. I don't bother with anything that has less.

2929761
I am sorry about the grammer.

2930593
thank you, and sorry about the gramatical errors

2930628 Don't worry too much man, that will get better over time.

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