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Ponyhammer 40k: The Cursed Tome

The Sisters of St. Twilicorn seek the cursed tome, The Book of Par’tayz, only to discover that the Thunderhooves Chapter of the Big Macrines also seeks the tome, though for different purposes. As they search for the book, they must overcome mutual animosity as they discover that a larger conspiracy is afoot and they are hardly the only ones who seek the book. Can they survive harrowing battles to come and, more importantly, can they survive each other?

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Zacharie-the-merchant

Zacharie-the-merchant #1 · Jul 20th, 2013 · · ·

Not bad, give a bit more detail, perhaps a larger variation in names , spring a ordo hereticus agent in there with a wide brim even,
Don't forget the kaskrins and the catachans , or the Cadians , the death korps of krieg , hmmmm , oooh here's an interesting one, vinyl the ear burster chaos mare-ine how about a bane blade , or a storm hammer? A Titan would over do it but.
Try to keep a little more to the 40k when linking , otherwise it sounds a little , conspicuous .
Have fun!

jszellmer

jszellmer #2 · Jul 20th, 2013 · · ·

2906065 I'll have to consider it. I'm still working on characterization and I admit to sucking in the name department. I am probably going to keep the number of named characters relatively small to help avoid confusion, (and to maintain my own sanity) though I might include others later. The Vinyl suggestion is definitely worthy of exploration, though. Ironically, I was worried about putting too many 40k references in and having it not pass muster for not having enough MLP references.

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