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Subject 19


I believe that stories help us to ennoble ourselves, to fix what is broken in us, and to help us become the people we dream of being. Lies that tell a deeper truth.

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For quite some time there have been heavy tensions between Equestria and Prance. The princesses don't want to admit it, but war seems inevitable. However, there is one pony who can help. Not great at descriptions and this is my first story for this site, so cut me some slack. If you like this story I would greatly appreciate it if you left a like.
Sequel- Second Chance: Darkest Hour

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 12 )

Pretty nice, chapters are little bit short but apart from that it's quite good like and a fav:moustache:

Matthew Harris

This is not the name of a pony. This is the name of a pathetic self-insert.

3064105 If you don't like the story, then don't read it.

Good character development, and a very interesting start. I'll read on. :heart:

Great so far. I love the ideas this deals with.

I see what you're trying to do, showing this guy the awesomeness if friendship. It's glorious dude, kudos to you.

Glorious. Subtle yet convincing.

It felt just a bit rushed but still good.

Holy fuck, this is getting dark

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