• Published 1st Aug 2013
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The Quest - Pizza201



Charlotte and George live in a world where Pokemon don't exist, that is until they find a Pichu encased in ice. Meanwhile in Ponyville, A unicorn named Twilight sparkle finds a Torchic. I KNOW THIS IS DUMB AND WILL BE REWRITING THIS WHEN I CAN!

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Chapter 4

Pizza201 and PizzaMike appeared in the room. The meeting was about to start. There was a cage by them. In the cage was a small pony. It was a mare judging by the shape of it's nose. It had a light pink mane, yellow fur, and wings. It looked very scared of the monstrous being that was peering into the cage. The being was none other than Discord, The spirit of chaos and disharmony. And the pony in the cage was Fluttershy. She had defeated Discord before, but with the help of her friends. She could not defeat him now, for her friends were not there. "Let's get this meeting over with." The spirit of Chaos sighed, as he filled a glass up with chocolate milk rain. " I have some chaos to reign." He drank the glass and threw the chocolate milk behind him, which resulted in an explosion. Pizza201 and PizzaMike gave a salute.

"Sir! Twilight Sparkle has found a Torchic. Sir!" PizzaMike said.

"Ah I see. We are going to have to deal with that." Discord said.

"Sir! Two archaeologists Have found a Pichu. Sir!" Pizza201 added.

"Who are these Archaeologists?" Discord asked.

"Sir! They are Charlotte and George. Sir!" PizzaMike answered.

"We need to keep an eye on them..." Discord proclaimed. " Watch every move they make and report to me everything you find you two."

"Sir! Yes. Sir!" Pizza201 and PizzaMike assured.

"Pizza201, Make sure you tell 2 of your top minions to "handle" Twilight Sparkle and the Torchic she found. And tell them to capture them and any other pony if it get's out of hand." Discord told Pizza201.

"Sir! I will tell PizzaWanka and PizzaTyler to get on it. Sir!" Pizza201 said.

"Good. Now get going. I have some Chaos to reign." Discord said to them. Then Pizza201 and PizzaMike left. " Now." Discord said as he peered into the cage that had the little yellow filly in it. " How am I going to deal with You?"

Author's Note:

"There you go PizzaWanka I put you in. Happy now?" Pizza201 told PizzaWanka.
"OMG FINALLY THIS IS SO AWESOME!" PizzaWanka happily said.
"Calm down or I will take you out again." Pizza201 threatened. PizzaWanka immediately stopped.

Comments ( 6 )

Advice: Make the chapters longer. At least 1000 words a chapter shouldn't be too much.

2974392 Thanks! I guess I kinda have that problem when writing stories. :twilightsheepish:

2974447 Best you could probably do is completely rewrite the story and make it less rushed. I'm sure you'll start getting thumbs up then. :twilightsmile:

2974483 Thanks. I'll try that! Expect new and approved chapters! :yay:

Sue
Sue #5 · Aug 1st, 2013 · · ·

The description gave me cancer.

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