Lelouch Vi Britannia has done many remarkable things. Build an army , take over the world, die to bring peace to the world , and live to tell the tale . What he didn't expect is to end up living in a world full of colorful talking ponies and become one of them. Now Lelouch must grow accustomed to living in Equestria and make friends with it's inhabitants while having to deal with annoyances such as natural disasters every week, chaos caused by six certain mares, and worst of all the constant stream of mares that keep hitting on him. Maybe if he's lucky he'll find love... or maybe he'll get killed again. It's gonna be a long journey for our Little Demon that's for sure
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Bah, was hoping for more from your intro other then just a written account of the end of R2. Oh well I'm interested to see how you play out this story
I Lelouch Vi Britannia command you, All of you, Eat Cupcakes!
Yeah, let's see how well you capture the characters.
Also the title of this alone sent me into a gigglefit.
The things that end up getting a crossover on this site, hah!
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I skipped over it myself, but it's still probably a good idea to have for the readers not familiar with Code Geass.
I will be keeping an eye on this story, but am thusfar skeptical. For one, you might want to try to find an editor to go through and point out the little errors strewn about the story. And secondly, but most importantly, I have yet to seea real reason for Lelouch to be in Equestria. The best crossovers all have a purpose, a greater plot with a resolution that revolves upon the involvement of the character or characters pulled into the world in queation. It can be anything from a problem in a characters life to saving a life, or even finding peace. If you don't already have such plans, which you might that I can't see yet, try your best to think on this important question....
"Why is Lelouch here, and what do I want him to accomplish?"
3186266 I do know all these things and they will be revealed in the story
duh. My dear man you can't read a story and learn everything in the first chapter and you don't know what will happen. As for Lelouch's purpose I promise you my friend all will be revealed in due time you simply have to keep reading to find out. In the mean time just have fun reading the story. Don't frown on everythinghttp://www.fimfiction-static.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png
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Which is why I merely said I was skeptical, but still giving it a shot. I know one will surely not learn everything in a single chapter, but as a fellow crossover writer, I think it is important to draw a bit of a hook of mystery into the first chapter to make readers want to find put what happens next. You certainly didn't do anything wrong at all, so don't think of it as me tearing down your story. I just know the amount of extra effort that needs to be put in to a crossover fic for it to stand out, and was merely wary because we all know hat some amateur writers will write a fic only for the fact that they think "Oh man, wouldn't it be awesome if ____ ended up in _____?"
I am not automatically attributing that to you, of course.
Plus, as someone else that has a feideas for a Geass crossover swirling in the back of his head, I hope you do a good job with your own story.
3186345 I see. I apologise for being too brash. I assure you this isn't going to be a bad fic. I will do my best so it isnt
I might even ask ya for a few ideas.have fun reading it
I can't wait to see where you take this!
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I, Lelouch Vi Britannia, Command you! Di- er... Finish this story!
Hmmm, a Geass crossover.
Consider me intrigued. Also, if you want I can act as a secondary editor/proofreader. Up to you though.
Well done
also YES ANOTHER CODE GEASS STORY!!!!
Lelouch V Britannia commands you, continue this story!
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I think I can top that:
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YES finally a code geass crossover! we demand MORE
I am intrigued, but you need to watch yourself on the whole grammar department.
Otherwise, consider me a watcher.
If he turned 360 degrees, he made a full circle. Didn't you mean 180?
So yea, grammar needs work, but the premise is very interesting.
Also, since it hasn't been mentioned yet, I assume his geass didn't make it to his new body? (it was permanent at the end of the story, and if his clothes didn't make it here, neither did contact lenses)
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i saw some minor typos but who cares, i'm not an editor and the chapter was great so far. Please write more
I wonder what will happen we twi meets lelouch, both are very smart but although twilight is the thinker kind she's not the cold thinker one.
MORE MORE MORE MOAR!!!!
NUNNALY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh...right...
Plz write moar
I can't wait until the next chapter is up
(creepy stare)...
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Finally somebody comes up with this idea. I've actually made some code geass ponies in the pony creator, should you like to see them. I can't wait until he meets Pinkie Pie.
Pinkie Pie: smile.
Lelouch: get away, you pink expression of happiness! You remind me of Euphemia and my never ending guilt!
Now the real question is, who would win this confrontation?
Pinkie: WE SHALL CURE ALL OF LULU'S PSYCHOLOGICAL PROBLEMS WITH POWER OF FRIENDSHIP! HE WILL EAT CUPCAKES!
Be very afraid, Lelouch…
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with or without rainbow sprinkles?
Plz make more
OhfortheloveofmemoremoremoremoreMORE!
Huh, is this still story still continuing?
i do hope that this continues.
Also just a thought, it would be fun if lelouch made his story into a book and it was a number one seller and twilight's favorite.