Kingdom Hearts II: A visit to a new world

by SolidFerret

A new episode has been added

With the world cleared. Sora sealed the keyhole for good there. He said goodbye to the friends he met there and left along with Donald and Goofy.

Back in their gummy ship, Jimmini Cricket informed them that Equestria needed them once more.

Comments

[cobeoe]

so short

[PuzzleBrony]

You have a talent for making the story feel like you are playing the game!

I do have a few questions though. Why is goofy a manticore while pete is a diamond dog?
I like the idea, but to me it feels like it should be the other way around.
I was half expecting pete to be a pony.(weird)

One of the things I did not like about KH2 were the "forced failures". In the original KH, you could win or lose and get a slightly different cutscene afterwards that eventually came to the same conclusion. I want that back.

The battle scene clip was a nice touch, but it seemed too long for the amount of text given.

[SolidFerret]

3500409 Shit, did I write him as a Manticore, could have sworn I said Diamond dog. Also, I didn't play a lot of the first game. I got to Ursala and that was it.

Edit: Turns out, I implied he was a Diamond Dog. I never said Manticore at all.

[PuzzleBrony]

3500417

My bad. That makes a lot more sense. I wonder why I thought he was a manticore?

I don't blame you. The Little mermaid area was very difficult due to the controls.

Keep writing! I really enjoy your story!

[The Dankest Meme]

LOL, our stories have the same cover art.

[sakuralovelight]

i really like the story is there going to be more???

[SolidFerret]

4684642 Yeah. Working on the second chapter.

[sakuralovelight]

4685070 okay thank you for letting me know

[Dimension Tripper]

update please