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Did he leave the money and take the letter or did he forget it all?
Can't wait for more. Thanks to the power of advertising, Silver will become a shop tycoon and create the equestrian version of Walmart.
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He left the money as the tip.
The letter is still in his satchel, just not read yet.
I like silver hope she becomes a main character or at least a quieyt freaqent character
another great chapter.
Some length. Me like. Can't wait for next chapter. What was with the spray paint though? I don't remember much of the last chapter. To far in between, y'know?
4765158 to increase discords power by causing chaos so it will be easier for discord to find the changlings because time is running out faster than they thought
4765300 1. Your grammar is and you should feel bad. 2. Causing chaos...by spray painting a SINGLE room. It doesn't matter if it's a princesses' room. A SINGLE spray painted room. Stop being silly.
4765331 that was literally the reason discord gave and he also said it was a prank and knowing discord he just loves to mess with people, the princesses especially, so what chaos does go on, i think, is not so much the princesses but the guard posted at the door or a maid seeing it and panicking and probably rumors getting spread but I wouldn't know the future of the story since I'm not the author and also I only check my grammar when writing stories
4765388 well guess what. When you only check your grammar when you write stories, other people can't understand shit your saying. You need to practice EVERY chance you get if you want to write a good story.
this one is back? if so then great i will go tell the... wait what was it again?
4765449 my practice is doing short stories that are about 2000-3000 words about twice a week and usually it is writing thing out of my comfort zone to expand my horizons in writing and improve on it in general it's not the fact that I don't want to make time for more practice it's that I already am
4765485 it doesn't matter if your writing short stories. If you only practice on stories you can't get any better. The point is, your grammar is,bad and you should feel bad.
The quality seems to be getting better! Keep on going down the path you're going down!
Great chapter once again, I want to see Celestia's reaction on the prank. So far I like the story and I hope you update soon.
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Thanks! I'm glad to know people are enjoying the story.
And since my job more-or-less ends a week before school, i should be able to get a decent couple of chapters out sooner than before.
4765331 The spray paint was designed to attract birds.
luna- 'hmm, an ominous looking Minotaur with a metal mask obscuring his face came in saying to be a messenger from kestrel, a being with very similar physiology to said minotaur..... nope, nothing wrong here' "welcome stanger!"
ha! Woulnt it be funny if that's the 'other human' hired by discord only in a similar minotaur disguise ... w8.. That's very unlikely right
i love this guy
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True. The disguise seems to be rather easily spotted. At least for our protagonist here. He is wearing a disguise, so he might as well be able to spot it. Though it makes me wonder if the minotaur will be important in the future.