Not a Humans in Equestria fic, we're going by EQG rules, yeah!
So Daria and her "friends" stumble across a magic mirror and of course they find themselves ponyfied in Equestria with their only means of returning home being the Element of Magic itself...but due to a huge misunderstanding they end up on the run from the Royal Guard, the Elements of Harmony themselves and the entire Changeling Hive.
With lots of dry wit and sarcasm, plus a little drama, adventure and some shipping for fun, this is going to be the strangest experience Daria has ever had...and she's met personified holidays!
Daria/MLP:FiM crossover.
Thanks to DanShive for the cover image which was also the inspiration for this fic.
Sorry but stuff has come up, thought I could just ignore it but no. So the story is on hiatus till stuff is dealt with.
I clicked on this story because it was rated as bad.. Now I'm confused... What's with these people and pushing the "thumbs down button"? I like this story, yeah it's a little different, but it's still really good. This is yet another example that people are cynical a** holes, and just do "that" for the fun of it. This, in my good reasoning.... Deserves a thumbs up! I hope you continue the story, I'd love to see what happens next!
Now comes the ever-present challenge of waiting patiently for the next chapter.
2883476 Thank a lot.
I was really worried about this story since it's been years since I've written anything. At least somepony likes it.
I'll do my best to get new chapters up at a reasonable rate.
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Sentences require punctuation at the end; in this case, periods. (This error repeats throughout; I will not note every single occurrence)
You have other punctuation problems as well but I'm disinclined to point them out at this time.
thing
weathered
jostle
The word you're looking for is "gait", but it isn't even a proper word choice for this scene in any case; you don't need anything after "Quinn's" to convey that Brittany got her leg tangled up with Quinn's.
spin (Are you using an iThing to write this? Because these seem like autocorrect errors...)
Multiple issues with these sentences. Proofreading is your friend.
"It's" is a contraction of "it is". "Its" is the possessive pronoun "belonging to it".
Oh god shoot me now. So many STUPID errors that could've been avoided with a simple reread of this thing.
"horse", "its", "tied", "pigtails"
confident (confidant is something else entirely)
"Isn't" should be capitalized, and I think you meant "wonderful".
(You seem to have a LOT of problems with remembering to capitalize things that are in quotes. Again, proofread.)
scent
nose
Yyyyyeah...you might want to dial that down a bit, because you're failing badly.
But that's the least of your worries. You need to go back and proofread this thing and fix a huge pile of really stupid mistakes.
As to the story itself...eh, the idea's cliche but workable, there's a chance this could be interesting. It's less the story itself that's turning people off than it is the really glaring mistakes.
2900553 Wow, I had no idea my writing had gotten so sloppy.
I realise I should have put "girls" but the "thee" is actually correct in so far as that's how the character speaks, but yeah I'll work on the rest, promise.
Nice chapter!
Will Daria be having the same cutie mark she has in the picture?
7841241 I hadn't really thought about that to be honest. I've sort of given up on the story since I didn't really think it through properly and didn't know were to go with it. I can't believe it's been 3 years. I've been thinking of rewatching Daria and giving it another go though.
Should probably edit the first chapters to fix the spelling errors and such as well.
Is it any good? Is it worth reviving I mean?
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There are literally only TWO Daria/MLP fanfics on the site. I'm glad I know another brony out there who likes that 90s Little Miss Cynical. PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!