Trust the all knowing member josh. Trust it...

Last call for Tartarus, otherwise known as Pony Hell. All passengers going to Pony Hell please board at Gate 666.

Loving the story so far!

REALLY like how you're implementing this. I love the way this story is going. Please keep reading! I was afraid this story had died with only the first chapter. Stick with it for the finale!

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Don't worry it comes with the devil's food cake.

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Here's my ticket, am I too late? No? Damn, this is one train I was REALLY hoping to miss.

I feel kinda guilty for waiting for this so enthusiastically. Oh well, who cares, it was a great chapter and Silver Spoon is a real filly fatale, Josh is doomed.

Anyone else think that her father put this idea into her just so he could get Josh under his hoof permanently?

this is going to one hell of a RIDE!!nice work

That jogging away.

Oh good Lord that was funny!

Me: Hey, this is getting good!

Josh: *Puts on towel, walks away*

Chapter: *ends*

Me: Oh, you fucking TEASE

You really have a thing for ponies goading humans into some lovin' dont'cha ?
Your Princess would be proud

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Cunny is a funny word. I know it means vagina, but the word still looks silly.

2989183 Oh god yes

"off now" Well somepony needs to get laid, oh wait
"disappointed" He doesn't have 3 legs like big mac has 5 silver....
Damn, so close

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Like silver

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when this is done you should do one with princess celestia

2989440 I am actually intending to do so.

poor josh, silver will be constantly trying to break your barriers.. and she will succeed.

Trust thyn divining rod and you will make no wrongs

Gettin good AP, although by this point I should know you love those tease endings.

Gotta say, Josh is not coming across especially smart though. He catches SS watching porn, then okays the obvious trap of a sponge bath, and finally decides getting naked and jumping in the tub is a smart idea... If he had been fighting against his secondary brain, located conveniently between the thighs, then most of this could be explained, but c'mon Josh! You're supposed to be smarter than that.

Now go make some dinner. I'm sure Silver Spoon won't try to excite you or distract you with a blowjob at all.

Well it's like Robin Williams said about the male reproductive system being designed by committee, "We've tried to wire the penis to the conscience......and it keeps short-circuiting." Keep them coming directly.

I can imagine Josh in a constant sweat, with the thought "MUST.....NOT.....BANG....." running through that head of his.

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you.....I see what you did there...

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The best distraction.
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ALL ABOARD!!

You know, I'm not quite certain were this preconception of human males always being... smaller than their pony counterparts is coming from. Within our own order (primate) human's are easily the biggest, both in actual size, and in size relative to the body. The average penis size of the adult human male, barring any odd factors, is typically 4.23-7.53 inches long, with the average circumference being about 4.8 inches around, certainly not shabby by the standards of the animal kingdom. Yes, horses are bigger, but they also have a vastly different reproductive system that ponies just don't seem to have (it would be really, really obvious on them if they did have it); instead, they seem to fall more in line with a more human reproductive system, making the standard measurements for equines completely irrelevant. To continue onwards a bit, the average human male has anywhere from 1-3 inches of extra penis length within his own body, which can be mobilized fairly easily in an elective procedure once the person in question reaches adulthood; take in mind that all of the numbers listed thus far are averages, people suffering from a condition called micropenis can be much smaller, while others can be much bigger.

Getting that out of the way, I can't help but feel the characters in this story are a little... dim, if you catch my drift. The male lead seems to be making mistake after mistake as he simply goes along with the flow, I just get the feeling he isn't even trying to use his brain, which disappoints me somewhat. Then there's Silver Spoon, a filly well on her way to adult hood, scribbling like I haven't since before the first grade, that's just... does she have a learning disability? No, really, I'm being serious here, does she actually have a learning disability? Honestly I can't think of any other reason for her to be so... slow, especially in comparison to the particularly thoughtless male lead. Breaking away a bit I'm not saying that this story is bad, if it was bad I wouldn't be reading it, and I certainly wouldn't be going through all this trouble just to comment on it. The premise is intriguing, even if the characters aren't, and you have a good sense of pacing and character dynamic, like I said, the story isn't bad, I just think you could do better.

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Good for you

I forgot what I was doing before.

2988970 Here's my ticket! I rented the Pullmare car, if you'll remember.

Silver likes to be polished with a sponge fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/005/b/f/silverspoon__saucy_so_young__by_leyanor-d5qjgob.png

STICK IT IN HER BUTT

NUUUUU. COME BACK AND FINISH, YOU BOOB.

GODDAMMIT JOSHY BOY JUST FUCK HER

2988970 let's fucking go! I always wanted too ride Cerberus.

As someone who generally despises human-on-pony clop, I can say regardless that you know how to make it not only good, but erotic as hell. Keep up the good work.

Is it bad if you got wood?

2990657 Enjoy your why-boner. This is amazingly written, so the fact that it's foalcon is only mildly questionable.

2990781Yeah, not one for foalcon.

2990872 So don't read it. It is indeed as simple as that.

2990878But I like this one, strangely enough.

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Thank god, I thought I was the only one who kept thinking Josh was being a dumbass.
Seriously, I've seen harem anime protagonists with more brains than this poor sod.
And he's supposed to be negotiating a business deal?

Bull-shit.

2990872 Aaaaaand yet here you are.

2991049Funny how you respond to that comment, yet you don't read my other one. :P

YAY! UPDATE!!! Cant wait for the next one!

Here, you can have my soul, just give me some good ol' fashion filly-fucking next chapter, please. I DON'T CARE IF IT'S FOALCON, THIS SHIT'S HOT!

2991218Hehe....

You fucking tease!

I approve...

"Josh stared at the filly for a moment, before he leaned even further over the tub and rubbed the spung right up across the back of her neck."