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Werewolf, a term that is presented as myth and fantasy, stories made up to scare the youth from running out late at night, but there are two siblings who will learn that there is a thin line between reality and fantasy, and will soon be tossed into a mess of horror...
The amazing cover art is all done by the Ladywolf
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interesting with the sibling aspect,
good show
Do continue
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Well your writing style could use a bit of fleshing out, a bit more detail in places so it flows better. Other than that this is pretty good and I look forward to more. Good luck and happy writing to ya.
this is going to be a good one.
continue with the story... or else.
Do continue
Our. Not are.
Ex:"It ate OUR cows." Is proper
Ex2:"It ate ARE cows." Is improper.
Awwww you used the same werewolf picture then me on my story
2915033 ah crap...
2918515 Do you want me to change it?
Nah it's fine I'll change mine I'm tired of that picture anywayxD
Could I be of assistance proof reading?
This looks remarkably good, despite the grammar and spelling issues
Gotta love it when someone does something original with an old subject, or at least, that's what you promise 
I want to see where this goes, but PLEASE at least get someone to help you with the grammar and the spelling, it would make a good story actually readable
Oh yeah, and I love your page breaker:
Not sure if its supposed to be something specific, but I like it!
Awesome! NEEDS MORE CHAPTERS!!
Damn this is good! Too bad there's only small updates.... Hopefully the next one will be larger!!!!
keep 'um coming
*nods* Keep them rollin' Electric. You have my approval
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2974617 oh fire is waiting on ya
2974621 *nods* Where is he? Prince I mean.
2974646 back in the caves
2974649 *nods* I see. *takes off flying towards the mountain caves*
this is getting good
I LIKE IT
shit man
3296303 Remember the RP we did? Axius dying? Little dragon pony girl that was sad?
3299610 Sorry it took so long to reply i know who you are just how did you change your stats
3315909 Yes..... I tried to fool someone, didn't work, and now I do not have Selena's pic stored on my comp.....
It's "our" not "are"... That's just one thing amongst others, just thought I should point that out
OMG It's Hircine!!!
So far this is good, I am in suspense! Also did
die?
Nice, I would hope for longer chapters but still..Great job!
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more please!
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What's that
4234887 "don't be afraid of the darkness"
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I don't understand
4234912 i really like it
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Well I'm glad you did ;)
4234949 hehehe
Great chapter
, but I am a little confused on what is going on and what will happen next. Well, I'll soon find out. 
Interesting
I prefer Joel myself. I want to see his story progression more than Alice's
I prefer leaving Alice's part out entirely and just having her brought into the story in a different way personally. I kind of find her parts like unnecessary fillers.
Joel, mainly because I feel what's happening to be more interesting. Alice as a character is cooler.