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With the Templar's dead, and the apple hidden away with the amulet buried, Connor spends his life on frontier spending his time taking a well needed rest. But alas his help will be needed once more, but not in a way he has ever seen before.
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AN AC3 FIC, LETS READ
Edit: I spotted some errors, and at the end of the first chapter. It seem's abit out of character, ah well, maybe I didn't play AC3 long enough. (Chapter 2) And more errors, gave me a good laugh
Get an editer.
Shouldn't Coner's instincts tell him to attack, being a hunter and all??
title of chapter is called revelation
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I like this, No... I love this! I was waiting for a story like this and you gave it to me. Thank you!
interesting story. proceeds the story with corrected grammar.
Of course Conner would take a hit from a bear.
Ezio and Altair would've killed the thing in some epic fashion, and Desmond would have died.
So I suppose that Conner isn't the worst out of the 4.
Take all of your grammar, right, and make it better.
In this story Connor is old, and a little slow. Also he was raised a hunter, then trained to be a fighter, and this is more realistic, so that means it does not matter who you are. If a bear attacks you without warning, and slices you in the chest it will slow you down.also When you spend years running around, and jumping all over the place you will develop health problems, like arthritis, and stuff. just to say it.
On the flip side i LOVE
LOVE your support, and suggestions are noted and loved, You guys or girls make me cry every like, and comment you give me
Thank you
FIRST!!! And shit. Something happened to Connor. No good.
It's called a period. Ever heard of them?
Seriously, your entire chapter was riddled with sentences the length of paragraphs. You need to space out sentences because, in all honesty, this was painful to read. The only reason I'm continuing to read is because I'm a big fan of the AC series.
Would it trouble you if you could make the chapters longer? I dont mind waiting longer
I agree with kevaal.
Ok I will try also ideas and suggestions are welcomed
great chapter although I cant help but feel like connor is lacking screen time.
guard pony freakout time NOW
“If you say is true” Her voice was low, and strained.
“Realm, has told you…of my death”
I figured that out when he said it the first time
So many gramer errors make it sound like pirates
Whats with all the grammar mistakes? I mean I havnt really noticed it at all until this chapter
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I could be a pre-reader... Besides that, I happen to be a grammar Nazi so I could probably help you out a bit. 
I get to read chapters early, and you get less complaints about the grammar. Everypony wins! 
Noooooooo. Way to fast!
But still good
2194841 I'm sorry
its just hard to find time to write
it hurts man
A few grammar and spelling errors, I would be glad to point them out, but I love the story!
Didn't surprise them all but at least he scared rainbow so yeah good chapter by the way
cool... but I wish for longer chapters
I would of called Connor's pony persona Blind Faith.
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perhaps revolution or freedom would be a better name
2244746 Fixed.
Conner never retires
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Must be a pretty kickass story
Get an editor.
Looking good, liking where this is going, got me excited
2247640Got that one two
Cool keep it up.
Wait what did they d- OH GOD WHY?????
so is Shade somewhat like Dobby?
2257730 How is Shade like Dobby?
Haha he got laid, ah shit!
2257810 Well, that female had some *whistles* with Connor, If you didn't know, in the game Connor can chat with his assassins, and Dobby flirts with him.
1899137 DU DU DU DO DO DO DO SUBSCRIBE!
Let's get ready to rumble!!!!!!
I've always had a bit of a problem with this story, at times it seems as if you use too little, or to much Description, making the scenes feel very, very awkward from a reading standpoint, I also can see several spelling errors as well, and the dialogue feels robotic, as if there aren't actual things speaking.
I'm sorry if I offended you, but is English your 1st language?
2300555 I'm sorry i need to work i bit harder i guess and i really need to look it over sometime thanks for the pointer i see what i can do
IT'S A TRAP!!!
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starwars
2321229 YEA!
Y'know I've been thinking, If Connor got his hidden blade, he should use it like a snow pick, y'know like how they climb mountains with a pick, Connor should do the same with his blade. That and maybe he should break someone's wrist like in the last mission when he almost broke that guy's wrist in the pub. Just some ideas
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No...
ITS A TARP!!!
(Guess the reference... Hint: Its from a game)