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aquilerafroot


I write about Rari-Twi, Twi-Luna, Twi-Lestia, and combinations of these. On a long hiatus. Thanks for reading!

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Comments ( 89 )

Seriously now, WTF DID I JUST READ?... Because I liked it. :twilightsheepish:

She's certainley devoted to her studies, isn't she?

281911 She is indeed.:twilightsheepish:

>“Twilight… I want you, now!” panted the princess as she spread her thighs open to welcome Twilight’s magenta rod of pleasure.

>magenta rod of pleasure

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but

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:trollestia::twilightsmile::coolphoto:
I LIKE IT IN A BAD WAY
281911 Sex for dummies

I... am at a loss for words. So wrong, but.... so right. I could almost call this wincest.

Fuck books, get royal divine tang. :twilightsmile:

:twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush: / 5

Liked, faved, and downloaded. And will be added to appropriate groups soon.

Though, I do wonder about how Celestia got her horn in Twilight while in the discribe position... Eh, I will just assume it is an alicorn trick. :pinkiehappy:

282024

She's like this girl I once knew. She can fellate you while giving you a footjob. No joke.

No words can describe how happy I am to read more of the criminally underrepresented Twilunestia stories! Liked and faved at the speed of sound!

oooook, I came here thinking that this story was good, and after reading I've to correct myself. It's awesome :D :D

I almost clopped to this with my mom in the room:twilightoops:

Twilight: I fell in love with the Princesses because they were the most beautiful and wonderful beings I had ever laid eyes upon...

And they also have this thing they do with their tounges-

Well dood, I just came from the Twilight :twilightblush:
Me gusta my brony, dood.

Me Gusta. Bonus points for making Twilight the Dom in this.

I see that there is a growing number of people that have disliked this.
I HAVE put a warning, and if you proceeded to read despite that, don't blame me
Please give this an honest rating, don't troll it just because you read something you knew you would dislike in the first place.
And please tell me how I can improve if you honestly think that there is something wrong with my writing.

283111 You need to chill, dood. We Prinnies know a decent story (since we have to lie ALL the time to save our blue asses on a daily basis) when we see one, and this is a decent story, keep it up. :twilightsmile:

281905 :twilightsheepish: Thanks. And answering comments on a clopfic is kinda awkward... if it gets technical :trollestia:
281911 She learns about everything. Celestia teaches everything.
281942 Glad you thought so!
281959 Thanks for pointing that out! Overall this was kind of an experimental thing for me - it's great to hear some eh, advice? :trollestia:
281963 I was bad when I wrote it (?) :twilightoops:
281964 Indeedy doody :yay:
282001 There should be a fanfic about how consuming the juices of deity can make a pony immortal (wait, wat:pinkiecrazy:)
282063 Thanks LOL They're so good together are they not? :trollestia:
282107 Hmm, I thought I had a warning up there? I'm really sorry that this fic didn't change your opinion on clop, but there's a reason for this being a clop - there's going to be a lot of descriptions of sex. :derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpyderp1:
282154 Hey thanks :twilightblush: Glad you liked my first attempt at a clopfic.
282243 Alicorn sisters: You're so beautiful and wonderful too, Twilight :heart:
282232 I read it over again during class after it was published... hard time keeping a straight face :twilightoops:
282409 I thank you, Fusion Fool the 3rd :rainbowdetermined2:
283535 Thanks :yay::twilightsheepish:
283643 Thanks, it was just the first time my stories have been met with so badly :facehoof: Oh, well, I already knew that lots of people hated stuff that didn't seem moral enough, it was to be expected. [edit] No, wait, I'm over it!!! Cuz it's a clopfic :D

Twilunestia is one of my favorite yet most under-represented pairings. So thank you for adding to the pile. Enjoyable little read. :twilightsmile:

282024 I'll try to explain :twilightsheepish: They're kind of in a 69 position, but Twi's really short compared to Celestia. Celly has to bend her neck to reach Twi's rump; if they were 69ing she would touch her mouth to Twilight, but in this instance she dips her head a bit more so that it's her forehead and so the horn, that's entering... (hides behind Fluttershy's mane)

284587 Hehe, I'm glad you thought so :twilightblush::twilightblush:

284587

It is not a pairing, it is a threesome.

285999

In otherword she used alicorn powers to turn her neck to rubber.

What good is being a goddess if you cannot alter your body for fun and profit?

286121 Someday I'll have to write about some magical two-pronged um, thingys. :twilightoops::trollestia: Hm, the ability to use magic is just so :unsuresweetie: I think it's way too unfair to pegasuses and earth ponies :duck:

283111 That comment alone just gave you dislike #11.
"Well I warned you so you're not allowed to dislike it." - ...this is the most annoying thing I've ever seen people do. It's basically a modified form of the "Oh it's my first fic so please be nice! No trolls or flames please!" crap that shows up everywhere. And nobody ever listens. If you warn them, it makes them want to read it even more. People are like that.
"Give me an HONEST RATING." - What if an honest rating is a dislike?

For the record, I probably would have given you a thumbs up if I'd actually read the fanfic, so long as the sex remained tasteful and didn't fall into a fetish that makes me go WTF (Example: People being aroused by feet. I seriously still don't get how feet can be sexy.)

But you threw that out the window when you got defensive over dislikes. Seriously, lighten up. So you didn't get "OMFG I LUVZ IT!!1 RITE MOAR NAO PLZ1!!" Deal with it, suck it up, and work on the next story. At least you're still on the Popular Stories list. Granted, you're near the bottom, but you're still on it.

286818 Yeah, I agree I was too hotheaded when I wrote that comment, but I'm not going to delete it because that would kind of make me a coward, wouldn't it?
I know that I can't please anyone. I know that my stuff is far from perfect, I do. But since I personally never touch things that I think I wouldn't like (filly shipping, Spike shipping, for example), I just kind of thought that people would think more about not wanting to read something that they would puke over. But of course, I was wrong. Well, I've also learned a big fat lesson too. I have seen many instances where decent stuff has been trolled, and well I guess I let my imagination get the best of me. Oh, and I don't really care about being on the list, lol, didn't deserve to be on it in the first place. Oh, and by honest rating, I just meant don't dislike it just cuz it's clop, if it's bad, that's obviously ok.

Thanks for telling me this, it's not about my story, it's about my character. I'm still a teen, so you're allowed to do that. Thanks dude (or if ur not, thanks sis)

Uhm, when Luna came I had to think about this img.chan4chan.com/img/2010-03-15/1268610499047.jpg

Great story ;)

288052 That comment is win. And so much lolz


I've read better clop stories, but this wasn't to bad for a first attempt, unless I read the closing Author's notes wrong... Given some more practice, I think you could be a good clop-writer *Sage-Nod*

288052 Dat pic!!! Physics suddenly so fun :rainbowlaugh: Thanks :twilightblush:
288363 Yes it's my first one, and thanks :twilightblush: I'll surely try writing more, (crazy bad expression) :derpyderp1:

288941 You want to learn from the awesomest Clop Writer on FIMFIction? Read teh Romance Reports, and nearly everysingle one of RagingSemi's fics.You'll be better in ten days flat xD

Yeah.... I seriously regret allowing mature content to be seen.
But then again... i've sene worse. 4/5 stars because you scared me almost as much as the time I was in the bamboo cage in Khei San

289238 Will do, thanks for the advice :raritywink: I've heard of them but haven't had the time to check them up yet lol. Though I think I'll stick with my other shipping stories for a while... actually a big reason I wrote this was because I kinda wanted to do a clop scene with one of my other stories :rainbowwild:
290232 That's why they have the mature filter :twilightsheepish: lol bamboo cage...

This was very enjoyable, three ways between Twilight and the Princesses are very sweet. And very hot.:twilightsmile:

291068 lolololol glad you liked it :twilightsmile::twilightsheepish::trollestia: (y no luna emoticon)

298082
I thought that to, I wanted to post a luna icon.:twilightblush:

I also hoped for some celestia on luna action, but still very good. :twilightsmile:

I thought this fic was decent. Maybe a bit more foreplay next time with the sex but a DAMN good idea for a fic. not only that, but details were great. good job quill. :twilightsmile:

298097 Twi & Luna are best ponies :twilightsmile: (pretend there's a Luna here)

299515 Hehe, glad you still liked it though it wasn't completely wat u were expecting :rainbowwild:

302477 Thanks Punk! :twilightblush: Looking back on this now, I realized what a crzy thing I wrote... :derpytongue2: I'll keep all the suggestions in mind when I (hopefully) write the next one :)

Luna gave the other alicorn an exasperated look, but made no objection.

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Phoenix never grows old.

312824 Yes, now I'm thinking that I made her too tame :twilightoops: but dat pic, aww, I shared it to my facebook :rainbowwild:
313373 I'm honored that you like it! Thanks :twilightsheepish:

I didn't want to click the link to this story... I didn't want to read it whole, and I definitely didn't want to like it.... But I guess you just can't get everything you want. I'm ok with the way this situation turned out.

317814 I'm sorry :fluttershysad: I took the link off tho it can't be helped already. I'll add the link in a more inconspicuous place :facehoof:

319066 Um, sorry to have made it sound like I didn't like it. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, even if some part of my mind was wondering what the hell am I doing here?

Ok one of the prinnies, i think the one that has to go clean the kitchen after Lord Valvatorez's sardine rampages read this and thought "If Twilight can satisfy both royal goddesses at the same time, any other pony Twilight has sex with will be cumming for days, dood?" if we plan on using 288052's comment, over the period of 3-6 days to any normal pony Twilight gets it on with, dood. We all laughed.

319413 Oh, okay :twilightsheepish: I'm really glad you liked it! I know some people aren't comfortable with clop and everything :raritywink: Thank you :pinkiehappy:

329278 Good, I'll have :twilightsmile: do :raritywink: and the poor fashionista... let's just say the Boutique will be ruined :facehoof:

I have just this to say twilunestia is my favorit shipping.:twilightblush:

The cloppy parts felt a bit rushed and under-detailed, particularly Twi/Luna.

284587
You... wouldn't happen to know of any other's with that pairing would you?:twilightblush:

Haha that was really good. I only have two thoughts. In one spot you have "signed" instead of "sighed" and I think you should have a little bit more with Spike confronting Twilight upon her return. :pinkiecrazy:

But my theory was correct. You do right good clop :derpytongue2:

Fun read :coolphoto:
Thou why are both of the princesses so dependent on twilight and waiting their turn? I mean there are 3 horns and 3 vagos (and 3 mouths and 3 butts if you want them ;))...

355502 Thanks for the advice, I'll keep that in mind if I revise this and if I write a second one :twilightsheepish: I love you all for helping me improve.

381621 Ooops, sorry! It's probably the 2nd time that was pointed out in my fics... since on the screen h and n sometimes look alike... :facehoof:

389069 Lol, actually I'm... well... um... it's just becuz... Twilight is best pony... So I selfishly made this fic where she gets everypony, but didn't want to make it direct incest... :twilightoops::twilightoops:

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