The six elements of Harmony took Twilight's birthday party to the Canterlot garden party in Sweet and Elite. But what happens after that? The party relocates again at the request of Princess Celestia, and Luna comes as well!
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aquilerafroot
I write about Rari-Twi, Twi-Luna, Twi-Lestia, and combinations of these. On a long hiatus. Thanks for reading!
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There's potential here - looking forward to seeing where you take things.
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Gee... this is actually the 'other story' I was talking about
Looking forward to more!
Looking forward to more!
Oh you tease please write more
this story was okay to read up until now. I miss the adorable innocence of the mane 6 a little bit and the nightclub location doesn't fit into the general atomsphere of the show. Furthermore some things seem rushed, you could try to slow down a bit in the further chapters and establish some dialoge between the characters.
Only some minor remarks, otherwise a pretty solid story, i'll definitely will keep an eye on this one.
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Thanks
Well actually when I wrote this I really wanted to do something fun, silly, even.
And the nightclub... I loved the pic by crabmeatstick (the link's in my description) and that day I woke up a bit giddy, so I wanted to write something crazy (by pony standards)
And thanks for the suggestions
I'll try to slow the pace down in the future, be more detailed and such
And then they all had sex.
The end.
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8 mares and some alcohol. Oh, and there's Fleur and Trixie too... it's just a party, isn't it?
Hmm
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So 10 mare plus any clones the magically inclined among them may create in order to double their fun?
Sound like a blast. 
While I can't say I'm too partial towards clopfics, I am a furious Twilestia shipper
. I'm more than interested in seeing where this could go 
.
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Btw, the next chapter's going to be a bit milder 
But after that stuff's going to - (influence of royal vault wine, pole dancing, Fleur de Lis, Trixie...)
Right now I'm torn between making it crazy havoc or gentle drunken fun turning into shipping...
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Twilestia you say?
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Either works, but for the purpose of comments talking about how things could get crazy is quite fun even if it does not come to pass.
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Poor Fleur, she had it all with Fancypants but has fallen so far that she must turn tricks and perform at burlesque shows just to survive
Ah, I jest, I jest. I look forward to seeing where and how they come into play
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THAT PICTURE IS FREAKING AWESOME.
Nice re-introduction of Trixie.
The artwork is a nice something extra to add to the stories (this and Curls).
262943 Thanks
It was my first time drawing ponies (this illustration for After Party), and it took 2 hours
including looking for tutorials LOL
Hmmm.....some Twilight X Trixie going on here huh? This should be good.
Interesting, although the structure of the sentences feels off to me.
266456 I get all the mares is going to be
's theme song 
267759 Yeah, I've been told that this chapter has sentences that are too long winded and over-descriptive, thanks for pointing that out as well, I'll see what can be done in future ones
268358 I see also not only is Rarity going to be shipped, but so is Luna and Celestia. Are you by chance trying to introduce some Rarity X Celestia?
268554 The artist of the pic of my inspiration has in fact told me that "Rarity was drunk and checking Celestia out"
But we'll see 
269979 Whoa! I can't wait to see where this heads.
I sense Celestia with her leg around somepony at tha end and whispering 'Swag'.
but 
'ld also be a new one.
I hope its
Then again Twiluna... SO MANY CHOICES!
Such a fun story. And a lovely picture as well. So adorable. I'm also doing my best not to make the worst joke ever about it since I love the picture too much to do something like that.
270376 I hope I'll be able to get more work done on this - university applications and first world school stuff is kind of taking up a lot of my time
I wanna hear it lol!
293356 Indeedy doody! I really need to get drunk when I write.
301646 Tell the joke
301770 Ah crap. I know that feeling, I'm in college as well.
301770 .... Sigh, okay, but don't yell at me for how bad it is, cause I did warn you.
Well, all the ponies on the right side of the picture seem to be 'horny'
There you happy now?
Haha, this is awesome. I was listening to On My Level while reading the first chapter and I had this uncomfortable feeling that Luna and Celestia were going to... well basically act out the music video and then take advantage of Twilight while she was high out of her mind. That would have been interesting to read
but it doesn't quite sit right with me. So it was good to see that their intentions are less malevolent than they appeared to be.
It's also good that the story has slowed down a bit, but please don't slow it too much. Gotta have some 'action' to keep things interesting..
302124 Yes... must take care of those matters before tending to world of pony - tho I DON'T REALLY WANT TO
302335 Yeah, happy now
317413 Hohoho, I'll keep that in mind, next one's got Fleur coming up, (hopefully, if I don't suddenly think of more crazy stuff to put into the chapter), so it's going to be funner.
318519 I'm glad you enjoyed the rather silly joke. Now I don't feel so bad for typing it.
318519 Same here!
so neither celestia nor luna knows where this is going...im not quite sure how this is gonna end up; hopefully things dont become to awkward
really good so far though
can't see the pic because it's blocked on my school's network, but liking the story so far. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
update ALL the epic stories
331527 Thanks
and yes it's going to get a bit crazy (centering around Twilight, who all my stories are about, of course 
), tho I have to say I'm not sure myself when I'll update this... 
398637 Apparently my school does that as well = = those paranoids, they even blocked deviantART (Category: Explicit Art), but luckily I can still access it if I'm using my mobile. Lol, so... which one would u like to be updated first?
401768 the love the new hairstyle twilight one hasn't seen a single update yet...and Twilestia is one of my favorites, though any of the stories would be awesome
402169 I'm working on it
and I expect it to be at least! 4k words... and I'm genuinely interested... do you think it's going to be a slutty story (from the 1st chapter)? 
402186 no, it seems like a nice little romance that is hinting towards a bit of maturity, but there's nothing wrong with that. also, Moonlit balcony is another favorite of mine
..and then everything degraded into an orgy of epic proportions with twilight giving away her virginity to Celestia while taking Rarity's...
when will you update this story again?
402200 Thanks, I'm honored
Well GMT's updated now so you know 
Apparently there's some unworldly stuff going on... 
430459 That, would be pretty possible, to tell you the truth, but I'm not gonna leave spoilers LOL
I just love ponies with horns
Yes, it's so obvious from what I write 
And to answer that... not so fast, I'm afraid, it was originally going to be short, maybe ending at the next chapter, but I've got quite a lot of new ideas... but need to smooth out.
455616 Ok then, take your time, awesomeness requres time to be sorted out before being relased
Can we still hope for another chapter? Because it was a great story, so far.
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Hey there
I'm going to finish this up soon, for the sake of the people reading it and hoping that it will update 
If you want to see the draft of one or two more chapters - I'll be expecting feedback on this, so if you don't want it spoiled it's okay, I just want to see if the direction I'm taking is likable - please PM me by Thursday, 
It's not like editing, but I just wanted to know more of you readers' opinions 
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i was like: wth, when did i comment over there
and im sorry; no i don't want spoilers
please sir can I have some more
I posted a comment and got some more
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In a way you did! It's not much more though, though more will be here pretty soon (hopefully)
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See, I feel so ashamed cuz apparently I've left it so long the majority of ppl who've read it have forgotten all about it
1304460 still though these chapters were nicely wrote and advanced the plot nicely without giving the future so i say to you good show sir also
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well...i remember the story's existence, i don't remember quite what it was about, and i had completely forgotten that had commented (funny thing; seeing your own comment and not remembering why you wrote that in the first place). a little re-read will be needed, but after that everything's chill.