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aquilerafroot


I write about Rari-Twi, Twi-Luna, Twi-Lestia, and combinations of these. On a long hiatus. Thanks for reading!

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After visiting the past in It's About Time, Twilight spends some quality time with Princess Celestia before returning to Ponyville. She then falls into a coma and wakes up where no living pony would ever wish to be, and things only get more complicated when Celestia gets an unexpected visit from herself. Featuring Twilight, Celestia, Luna, The Underworld, and some other alicorn etc.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 301 )

I like it! Altough i'm kinda curious what's gonna happen next.:twilightsmile:

P.S FIRST!:yay:

>Sees picture
>Dat ass :rainbowlaugh:

Silly Twilight.

I really like this one too! Was surprised by the abrupt end there, what happened to her?! :raritydespair:
Tracking and thumbed up! :twilightsmile:

Damn you! I don't need to track more stories! Stop feeding my addiction!:twilightangry2:

I think she finaly passed out from exhaustion, that or Celestia used a sleep spell on her. Still this should be very intresting to read I lookforward to the next chapter.

Well well, that was quick! This episode only happened yesterday and you've already got something for it? Looking forward to more, it was a fun read so far.

You can take all the time you want Twilight ‘cause I just thought of lots of lots of supplies that I could buy!

Nah, it's supposed to be something like:

You can take all the time you want Twilight ‘cause I just have to get the author some time, so that you can get closer to Celestia! :pinkiegasp:

awesome story, even though it's still only one chapter

313173
with twilight and celestia going; "author?...." that would be a little cliche but very awesome indeed
313293
it's based of the last episode if that's what your asking (episode 20 if im not misstaken)
312896
i imagine that celestia aint just gonna leave her there on the floor, depending on where she wakes up and under which circumstances; this could be hilarious

Naw, there's a time and place for pranks and a sleep deprived faithfull student is a poor mark to boot. If she didn't feel like moving her to the bed I'm sure she could atleast place her on a cuision and drape a spare blanket over her.

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Thats my reaction honestly.
Other then that.

GOOD JOLLY SHOW!
FAVORITE!

YES! Only one day after that awesome episode, there's already a fic on it. Now, on to reading! :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

Hot, steaming water into cooler, controlled room plus extreme exhaustion can make for some naaaaasty vertigo, haha. Now to read the companion piece! :pinkiehappy:

Somepony's gonna get raped! :twilightsheepish:

Twilight wasn't wondering why the Princess had a Jacuzzi in her bathroom???? I want a Jacuzzi in MY bathroom! Or at least on my back porch! Maybe I should steal Celestia's, it sounded big enough.... :trixieshiftleft: :trixieshiftright:

As soon as I read the author. My mind said "Hell no, this guy gave me worse nightmares than the time I was captured the the Viet Cong" when I read his OTHER story. forgot what it was called but look at that, he named it in the description as well! It's like they keep dragging me back in!

I'm guessing she fell asleep from exhaustion. Still interesting beginning.Tracked.:raritywink:

this is actually better than I thought it would be

sorry, mobile interface so typing will be a bit shabby.
312470 Hmm, so ur the person who also got 1st on moonlit balcony 3, huh? =p
312484 Thank you :twilightsheepish:
312505 :trollestia::heart::twilightsheepish: yep!
312623 yes, i dunno y i always can find those sleazy(?) screenshots 4 my fanfics!
312683 what happened unfortunately... u shall see next time hoho! glad u liked it :D hmm, and I read ur story and noticed it also has :trollestia:'s bath... ur idea of dirt cleaning is neater tho! :)
312794 Sorry about that hehe. my brain has too many ideas running around...
312896 good guesses! and thanks :D
313082 Thank u~!!! and yes u know i'm going to do a fangirl squeal cuz of your comment omigosh. :twilightblush: Well actually I think my writing isn't really developed, it's just that I have some imagination and something...
313173 4th wall breach, aw that Pinkie Pie, :pinkiegasp:
313293 newest episode, It's about time :twilightsmile:
313434 Thanks! and yes, um i left this hanging on purpose (people come with torches to hunt down author)
313460 Celestia is a nice mare~ of course she'll just leave her pupil to rest - no, that might not be true.
313592 Thanks! and that pic is lol.
313897 I don't know how I get the ideas :rainbowwild:
314010 Well one thing for certain: Twi's tired out. but what will Celly do~?
314041 :rainbowwild::coolphoto::rainbowderp::trollestia:
314207 :trixieshiftright::twilightsmile::flutterrage:
314603 I don't know... just seemed like something she'd have? :D
314691 Grr, Rambo! beat the viet cong? i don't really think i could do that! :D
314927 Thanks! :twilightsmile:
315080 maybe just a tiny fraction better?

315106 I am going to call Obama and tell him that if Princess Celestia has one I WANT ONE! (lol) :twilightblush:

313592 Who's that girl in that GIF? I must have MORE

MOLESTIA STRIKES AGAIN!
Come on, you were all thinking it. I just said it

Very good :twilightsmile:
Hope to see more in the future
Nice amount of detail :pinkiehappy:
Overall a good begining

315106 I had thought that this would be nothing but clop
but, I was wrong

@KMCA ur damn right i was thinkin it!!:rainbowlaugh: and auther?:unsuresweetie: plz plz PLZZZZZZZZZZ make the beginning of the next chapter something about twi waking up tied up!!!!!!:rainbowkiss: plz?:fluttershysad: if you could:twilightsmile:

314603 yeah a jacuzzi the sizenof a pool!
Also, this is going to be good.

Not bad! I'll be tracking this, seeing where it goes. :3

Not the usual pairing I would see... but this does have my interest...

Your have be tracked by the Fury of the Tempest.

twilight blacking out? i do believe lack of sleep can do that or she got a bump on the head.

:raritycry: Cliffhangers!!!!!!!! :heart:

Oho? This has most definitely caught my attention, great job thus far, Quill!
Gonna have to track this one. :twilightsmile:

TAB

316199 Don't touch me Princess! :raritydespair:

I'm tracking because I enjoyed your first chapter, but I feel like things passed by quickly without a whole lot of detail. Just my opinion.

Oh, dear. Twilight falling into a coma? I've NEVER seen this before. :trollestia:

316199
molestia... that's all I can think at the moment and you had to put the picture!!!

this is so much fun )poke(

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latest episode fic up so soon thats good

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