Sometimes when traumatic events happen to us as children, we never completely deal with them and simply move on. Now, Rainbow Dash is an adult, and she is quickly realizing that she will have to come to grips with her past before the memories tear her apart.
Inspired by Pink Floyd's "Learning To Fly"
Edited by: Azure-spark
http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Azure-Spark
Cover art by: recycletiger
http://recycletiger.deviantart.com
I was listening to Dead Island trailer music when I read this.
Well, the endings wasn't that emotional since the description itself tells us what to expect.
236701 This is true. I didn't know what to make the description, so I went with that. I fixed it, hopefully it's not too predictable now. Thanks for the feedback
236715 Now that's better. It tells us that there's something wrong, but we aren't exactly sure.
Another point, though: Since you've already clarified what happened and how he died, the following chapters will have to focus on RD's 'therapy'. Which is kind of... dull.
Scootaloo is NOT RainbowDash's Sister
236768 It's not meant to mean actual sister. They're close, is the point.
236760 Well, I'm planning to let that come in later. The next chapter is going to focus mainly on her spiraling down. I'm hoping the drama can save it lol
236790 Oki
<- Close see?
236476 That piece, makes MLD amazing lol
237146 If I added any music to THAT... Nope, not gonna say it.
write more
263607 lol, I'm working on chapter two, and hoping to have it up in a couple of days. Glad you enjoyed this
you are on the right track, my friend. just make sure Rainbow Dash is 2 words, but either than that, I can't wait for the next chapters!
Nice work man, I like the work on how Rainbow can't control her emotions!
Looking forward to the sequel!
264883
Is a second chapter still on the way? I was ready to ask about the "Incomplete" tag on this story.
343992 You know, I had forgotten about this lol... I did start on it though. I seem to be getting mostly positive feedback on this, so I will complete it soon. I'm glad you're enjoying it though :)
well... after reading Rob's newely featured story and long ago MLD, I've come to love these type of pieces. Btw what drew me here mostly was the cover art pic
344006 complete it soon my ass