What happenes next
I'm making this little new chapter just so everyone who is tracking this story knows, the sequel is now out :)
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/13086/A-time-of-sadness
There it is :) enjoy!
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OH YEAH!
335751 many thanks
glad you enjoyed it! Hope that single tear wasn't too important 
359140
thanks! 
394116
glad you're enjoying it! Or... not enjoying the events that are happening... Or, you know what i mean! 
EVERYPONY! I think he liked the ending!
235405
Damn DBK.
You're everywhere I go.
510351 Quit stalking me.
510359
Nevah!
528083 thnks! Glad you liked it!
583284 i guess you enjoyed the story then?
so i read your story...I thought it was good, well written, lots of emotion, but there were a few problems.]
1. TEXT WALL, break up your damn paragraphs more.
2.your grammar wasn't horrible, but it did have errors. (cahpter, id, capitalization, etc)
fix those and this story would probably get better ratings, oh and change the cover. A picture of a car photo-shopped into ponyville pushes away more readers than it brings.
good work though! just fix those things and your story should be fine.
should this story be human
read the whole story now. it was quite entertaining.