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Dark Avenger


"Un bon mot ne prouve rien." (Voltaire)

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After the end of their first semester in advanced flight school, a group of young griffon students get to spend a weekend in the lovely city of Fillydelphia. Not finding "the City of Blooming Friendship" quite as exciting as they had hoped, they decide to play a little prank on the socially awkward member of their party, Frankie.

A few exchanged pills, a good night's sleep, and a mysterious suitcase soon turns the reclusive griffon into a rampaging savior, doing everything he can to protect the unsuspecting citizens from every peril his derailed mind is able to conjure up.

Could this possibly have a good ending?

(Submission for Equestria Daily Flash Fiction Event #4)

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Comments ( 8 )

Ah yes. We don't find nearly enough stories about Griffons. Bravo!

With friend like these, who needs enemies?

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Thank you! :duck:

I would hardly recommend this story as the story to read about griffons, though. About 75% of it was written in less than a day as I rushed to meet the deadline... :pinkiesick:

2887064 Still, we don't get very many, so I cherish the ones I can find.

Oh my this is good. I'm laughing pretty hard.

I got a question about the world: guide mentioned 'post-alicorn age' but there is Celestia in the story, So what does 'post-alicorn age' mean ?

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I actually can't remember... :twilightsheepish:

Although I think it's supposed to mean "after the first appearance of the alicorns" (assuming that, based on the Hearth's Warming Eve tale, Celestia and Luna weren't around from the beginning...)

You know, this reminds me of when I took Adderall for my ADHD. I was running around like a crazy person, until it wore off. Then I was a demon. :twilightoops:

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