Equestria will soon be a battle ground. Beset by that which ponykind cannot hope to beat. Yet six beings crafted in war will stand to defend all ponykind. They are The Deathwatch.
3016046 we still have the Chaplains chapter to reveal and the black shield could very well be one (in the deathwatch black shields are brothers who have given themselves to the deathwatch severing all ties to their parent chapter)
I don't think they're Primarchs in the same sense as the other eighteen. I think they were meant for something other than war. Besides which, if the Emperor could create both male and female Space Marines, I'm pretty sure he would have capitalized on it immediately.
she and my second creation were spared the horrific tragedy that befell my sons, my people and myself.
Given how the biology of Primarchs and Space Marines works, I'm going to instead change this in my head to Luna simply mutating in a more drastic manner than other Primarchs. It is much easier to explain and, given her magic, it would give her the option of possibly switching between Primarch form and Luna form for producing Astartes and fighting (like Primarch to make Space Marines and smash stuff, Luna to blast with magic and because she's most used to it).
the Emperor is bacon all hail the Bacon lord
... back to reading
good read
quarter
unclean
probably a couple more but I'm not a proofreader
still a good read
So the ponies in this story are abhumans?
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Thanks for pointing that out. I shall correct that later. After work.
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Yep if they weren't the Deathwatch would perform exterminartus
BY THE EMPERAH! It's about goddamn time!
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I take it you enjoyed this chapter?
3012598 YES I DID! AND WHY I'M WRITING IN CAPS?! RAAAGH!
Woo! We have a Salamander in the ranks! The Xenos don't stand a chance.
Me too.
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What gave it away?
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Thanks for pointing that out.
3013897 The only space marine battle cry that I know by memory is the Salamanders', so... yeah.
Some grammar mistakes, but aside from that good chapter.
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That makes sense.
.... I wanted to see Angry Marine but begger can't be choosers
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we still have the Chaplains chapter to reveal and the black shield could very well be one (in the deathwatch black shields are brothers who have given themselves to the deathwatch severing all ties to their parent chapter)
The Emperor has spoken... A NEW CHAPTER! Brothers rejoice and read the holy edict!
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I take it you enjoyed the chapter?
3123032 I know that's why I want to see him
3123032
Yes it would.
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You really want an angry marine thrown into the mix don't you?
3127659 YES! Um... I mean yeah that would be great
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As I have said the Chaplin still has his chapter to be reveled, so you may get your wish.
Has no one mentioned the fact that Celestia and Luna are the missing Primarchs?!
This is gonna be good.....
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I don't think they're Primarchs in the same sense as the other eighteen. I think they were meant for something other than war. Besides which, if the Emperor could create both male and female Space Marines, I'm pretty sure he would have capitalized on it immediately.
3203513 well 1. Their not human. And 2. Their not male. So uhm. Good luck with that. Oh and nor are they non xenos.
Great chapter, Salamader hell yes, though I am personally a Raven Guard guy.
6090756 My favorite, to quote Magnus the red "SPACE WOLVES!!!!!!!!"
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Corax for the win!
Given how the biology of Primarchs and Space Marines works, I'm going to instead change this in my head to Luna simply mutating in a more drastic manner than other Primarchs. It is much easier to explain and, given her magic, it would give her the option of possibly switching between Primarch form and Luna form for producing Astartes and fighting (like Primarch to make Space Marines and smash stuff, Luna to blast with magic and because she's most used to it).