Red Dare

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The mane six are known for being the best of friends, and what a better game for friends to play together than Truth or Dare? But when Fluttershy, Rarity and Rainbow Dash hangout together and play the game together it can get rather messy.

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Prane

Prane #1 · Jul 4th, 2013 · · ·

I'm so glad I read Author's Note section first, otherwise I wouldn't survive through the first few paragraphs!
I wonder what Pinkie is up to... I guess I'll have to wait - but is it going to be developed in this story, or another one?
All in all, good start, keep it up!

vaguememory

vaguememory #2 · Jul 4th, 2013 · · ·

2821333 I was hesitant in actually putting Pinkie down in the 'characters' but I had to. I do plan on developing another story such as this one, but my rule was that somepony NEEDED to ask about writing another starring Pinkie . Well, thank you for asking, I will be sure to find some time to write that one, obviously it will be a sequel to this as it would be it's own short story . This, though, was just to throw some of my writing out there to see if I'd get any bites (I guess it's working). I'm currently working on a MUCH larger story and you should expect that in a little while. Thank you for reading, I'm very glad you liked it

sunnydays06

sunnydays06 #3 · Jul 5th, 2013 · · ·

omfg it took me a long 4 me to relize it wasent flesh!

vaguememory

vaguememory #4 · Jul 5th, 2013 · · ·

2826473 Yup, that was the whole point, sorry to scare you there . Hope you enjoyed it nonetheless, thank you for the much needed laugh this morning.

Rainbow87dash

Rainbow87dash #5 · Jul 5th, 2013 · · ·

I kinda knew it was a watermelon straight away, due to the teen rating and lack of a gore tag but great story, a bit bland perhaps

vaguememory

vaguememory #6 · Jul 6th, 2013 · · ·

Well this was inspired to be more cute than gore, perhaps a few people would shudder at the mentions of flesh, like you did . That and the fact that what inspired it was me cutting a watermelon, so it's not the story of the century . This was a way to get my work out there while I work on my actual project which should be out soon . Either way, it's good to get feedback.