Instant track. Naruto+being a pony= awesome.

Interesting.

I guess when your as old as Death and having lived. . .well you know, dealing with all those souls can be boring. . who says the guy can't have a little fun every once every few hundred years? :P

potatoe...liquid.....liquid potatoe...FTW!

so what of his sandals?

Is it bad that I'm hoping we'll see the fox again, still?

If he ever have a freak out and go Kyuubi/Nine Tails on them here an idea on how he may look.

Ok, as long as Naruto can still do ninja tricks like the shadow clone jutsu I'll be fine with this fic.  Also, if three certain fillies becomes involved, I call first dibbs on saying

"CUTIE MARK NINJA IN TRAINNING CRUSADERS"

Wow death.. you such a troll

Death: The Master Troll.

IM THE GREATEST HOKAGE!!! BELIEVE IT!!

Hmmm... Interesting.

i facepalmed at the title and then laughed like a maniac for 15 minutes...

my sister almost called an ambulance because i was convulsing on the floor...

that title definitly made my day, thank you

>>230413230413

No, they'll be saying,

"Cute Mark Crusaders Ninja Initiates! Yay!"

>>230576230576

Oppose, me bad.

I am speechless.

I'll track this for now, and read it later. it's late, and I'm sleepy.

strange very strange.  good story though

That son of a bitch. That is all.

he better still be able to use his jutsu or i'm dropping the story

>>230346230346 ermm...Maybe they're his hooves now?

Wow I was waiting for this fic to fucking long

I like it i just hope you dont blow it or give up half way through story...alot of peeps are doin that these days

Wait what about hand signs and his jutsus?

>>230851230851 Maybe

“…and that’s how I ended up getting a horse and a Caveman married. It was an experience that was insulting and a mental image I’ll never be able to erase from my skull. I hope you’re happy with me mentioning it, because I’m not.”

Pinkie Pie:... And THAT'S HOW EQUESTRIA WAS MADE

cool story, I'm following it

Awesome

WHO BETS THAT NARUTO FALLS FOR RD

OMG THIS WAS AWESOME

GAAAAAAH

SO MUSCH LOVE

oh and guys before you start a chapter play the naruto theme song

I think he'll have a more pony form of the jutsu. Kinda like unicorn magic for earth ponies. He'll probably only need to announce the jutsu and boom Shadow-clones everywhere!

Wait...  Naruto...  Hinata...

Hinata is shy...  And so is Fluttershy!

Naruto's gonna fall for Fluttershy!  

>>231323231323  I've been doing that the whole time!  

Not enough fics based off this.

LOL! THIS IS WONDERFUL! i never thought anyone would think of such a great combination!

>>231307231307 Either it's HER, or Flutters.

RD is the closest the Mane6 has to the Pink Banshee, while FlutterShy is the closest they have to Hinata....OH CRAP! HINATA!!!! NARUTO DIDN'T GET TO APOLOGIZE!!!!

Hmmmm interesting.

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Proceed.

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Moar

Want.

need moar

Just because its a Naruto Crossover doesn't mean I'll instantly hate it.

I find it intriguing.

Tracked.

WOW

Mane 6 inpoved

Ah, some finally addresses the obvious issue that is the language barrier. Sure it seemed a bit too convenient, but I've seen worse (ie a silence spell exploding, and this is from an Anime/Light noval, not a fanfic)

you really just used a cliffhanger... oh well.. i expect to see moar!

There were a few grammer errors but i liked it.

I think i speak for us all...Give us more or we will hunt you down and gut you like a fish

Nice, but I have one question for you.  For Naruto, which Naruto/how far into the anime series are we to the Naruto that's in thus fic?

Also, nice  job the Naruto personality.

>>232773232773

It's all the way in the Shippuden Arc, in the anime.

And thanks for the compliment Sgt. :D

>>232789232789

Thanks, that helped me out alot in understanding what his skill level and abilities ate.

DO NOT CANCEL OR PUT THIS ON HIATUS!

The death of this fanfic means the death of us all!

BTW , MORE

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Moustache spike and I approve. We expect great things of you!

Hahaha, Naruto, I thought he'd ask something along the lines of "Where can I get something to eat around here?"

Oh, but good story all in all, keep up the good work

After spell goes haywire...

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I was thinking that this could be a problem seeing as the ponies are generally portrayed as speaking english and Naruto speaks Japanese, Just keep doing what you are doing and it should turn out quite well.

Not Bad! An enjoyable read, and I am looking forward to the next chapter! Me thinks the demon fox will make an appearance in the future. .

Not bad :3

Very. I sence romance between naruto and Twilight, whos going to make the first move?!

also, FIRST!

Sweet new chapter

Naruto and brainstorm? I can't see that...

The plot thickens.

>>235791235791

Even I can't see that. Naruto? Brainstorming? What madness is this!?

>>235799235799 *looks at Naruto*

What trickery is this?!

>>235737235737

It's kinda hard not to notice it.

If some superior force didn't create a series of events to cause them to be a couple, I'm not sure.

On one hand, Naruto probably doesn't think of Twilight in that way (yet).

On the other hand, Twilight might not have enough courage to make a move.

Oh wait, this is just me and my silly theorizing.

>>235823235823

Your damn right

I know Twilight got a thang for Naruto mmhmm

Its just bound to come

In following this, I pretty much dislike most Japanese animation/cartoons, but i find Naruto's character amusing.

>>235838235838

It's fun to bend the original laws of character development.

Always knew Twi had a thing for tails.

*Laughs blatantly*... eye-muscles. Sorry, I just figured that's the main muscle Twilight's going to be using around Naruto. Mainly looking at Dat tail.

>>235896235896 You, sir.

As always, you made my day.

I want to see alot of jutsu's like the nine tailed fox or the shadow clone

Nice, I see what you did there.  Going for the Twilight/Naruto shipping. Any chance that Naruto can surprise them with some of his ninja techniques like the  Rasengan - Spiral Sphere, Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique, and the Oiroke no Jutsu - Sexy Technique

>>235960235960

Try and remember: Naruto has hooves, not fingers. It would be difficult for him to use anything in his repertoire... Although... you never know. He's freaking Naruto after all.

Sweet, a new chapter has appeared. I can foresee many laughs abound should Naruto still have his ninja techniques available.

Pinkie Pie: "I can warp reality by poping up in a place you least suspect!"

Naruto: "Really! So can I!

~"Shadow Clone Jutsu!"~

Naruto: "I guess you won't be the only one having fun shocking people, huh?"

Pinkie Pie:

Can't wait to see more!

~8chill

>>235977235977

I know, Naruto can always do the impossible. BELIEVE IT!!

>>236014236014

Oh sweet Celestia, I haven't thought of what would happen if those two got together.  

>>235947235947 New chapter is coming up today, Hope you're body is ready for it.

>>236094236094 HELL YES! MORE AWESOMENESS!

It was a very good chapter but there are a few grammer errors...try not saying something like: She wonders why her student....Instead say it like this: She wondered why her student...

Also for parts like: He starts to recall...Put it as: He started to recall.

>>236134236134

Thanks for pointing those out. They can be a real nasty pain to spot at times. D:

>>  DragonLS  well there were more i was just using those two as an expample

>>236164236164

Gah... I hate my grammar... D:

I can understand that...i hated all my english classes in school...im more of a math person.

I'm liking the frequent updates! Again, looking forward to more.

Seriously, what the fuck are those things on his face? Are they whiskers....or scars....or.....what?

>>236575236575

Um, they're whiskers, dude...

No, dammit!  He needs to ship with Fluttershy!  

A lot of pairing suggestions I see... This feels like some kinda poll, lol.

Heh, I feel the NaruSpakle paring is best. ...I think I just made a new shipping name.

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I approve of this fanfiction, I wonder if Celestia is gonna find his raspy voice annoying too?

... and then when he meets Fluttershy, she will remind him of Hinata, and she will start a new stalking habit: stalking Naruto because of his fox-like tail and wishker marks, WE WANT TO SEE SOME STALKERSHY MOMENTS!

>>238119238119 This.

Do it.

NOW!

>> Gytrash Dat pic, so epic lol

The Grim Reaper acts so funny. Believe it.

Bring out the next chapter soon and I hope you get him together with some pony too he needs it

okay, finally got around to reading the first chapter. Not bad. NEXT!

Alright, me like.

Bring me another bowl!

>>235977235977

Well, there are several fan fics where Lyra transforms her hooves into fingers....

Ugh... The site went down while I was uploading the 5th chapter. Stay tuned guys...

I read chapter 5 for a brief moment already. It was up at least for a few minutes.

>>243316243316

It was up already? Wonder why it disappeared... Dammit! D:

>>243321243321 David Copperfield!

I was going to comment on it when the site wouldn't show my comment being posted.

Alright, it's back up. This site can be screwy sometimes...

Glad you were able to get it working again. This chapter is part one of "Meet and Greet" I assume, with the Princess and Applejack being the only two mane characters not introduced yet.

It seems furry tail addiction exists in this world as well I see.

Good chapter, Great update. Till the next time.

~8chill

>>243374243374

You could say that, yup.

And thanks for the compliments my good sir.