• Member Since 27th May, 2013
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MegaTJ


Casual writer who loves ponies more than life. Mainly active on Fanfiction.net, so go take a look there for more! Fanfiction.net/~megatj

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He was found with bruises and scrapes, and upon waking, is found with a tortured view on life...

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 12 )

I want to see where this is going, and I will make a judgement on whether I like it later.

I had the story on the read later list so I can look at it when there was more content. After reading chapter 2 I can confidently say that you've set us up with a fairly intriguing character so far! I look forward to finding out more about him and his (mis)adventures with the cast!!

Comment posted by mapu deleted Jul 7th, 2013
Comment posted by mapu deleted Jul 7th, 2013

Trial run.:rainbowhuh: TRIAL RUN!:twilightangry2: I WANT MORE!:flutterrage:
I mean... if that's okay.:twilightsheepish: Please?:fluttercry:

Wow all of that on his birthday what an eventful day! :twilightsmile:

It was a cute chapter! :yay: I just wish it could be longer

Colt - A male foal.
With Twilight getting the hots for him and Fluttershy's approving wink...
Yeahhh....

I really, really hope you meant to use "stallion".
Not gonna continue reading because it currently reads like the start of a foalcon story.

6089951 Apologies, yes, I did mean stallion. I guess the revised addition didn't quite make it here as it did elsewhere. I can assure you this is no foalcon story and hope you will continue to read after this explanation. I had thought the show had used it for all male ponies when I began writing, so you may see the word more.

6090509 Ctrl F is your friend. You really, really, really should fix it.

this is a great story, I enjoyed so much!

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