Nightmare Moon returns and renders the Elements inert, but there is one thing she could not have accounted for. One unicorn, Twilight Sparkle, and endowments. Contains Futa
Uh.....wow, okay. This was good, though I would have liked to know what Celestia had apparently done to Luna, other than the banishment of course. It seemed implied at one point that something else had happened.
Twilight was.....well understandable I guess, and also kinda pitiable. Not wanting to harm anyone but not having the strength to resist the urge. Still, I think what they have now is okay, though frankly I don't blame Celestia at all for her reaction.
Honestly, I just hope this all works out without them having to run or such, because I don't believe Luna would have allowed Celestia to do that. Nor do I see Celestia doing anything to her sister while pregnant.
2876541 Well, this is an alt universe to one of my alt universes, so that's explained there. As far as what happens next, that'll be revealed tomorrow~
I don't know why Luna would tell celestia of what twilight did....unless she has concocted some 10 month plan to destroy her lol which would suck cuz I love the story so far....:) can't wait to see what happens next
2876931 Nah, I ain't worried about the downvote. My thing is, how can you like male/female clop and not like female/female clop with one of them being the male? Unless you just don't like lesbian clop, but even then it's not pure lesbian.
2876941 I dunno, it just seems a bit too weird... It's like she-males; it's too unusual to be attractive. I can see where you're coming from though. A girl with a penis is a guy (with biological exceptions of course) and therefore, futa is technically normal clop. But when I see futa being mentioned, I instantly assume Futa x Futa (therefore Male x Male) and I am not attracted to that. Apart from the futa in your story, I am not a fan of gore/dark themes and your story sounds like it is too dark for me to enjoy, sorry
2877888 I like it, but that's not where the idea comes from.
2877895 Warning: Contains copious amounts of your fetish. Heart failure due to overload is a possible side-effect of reading. Use caution when browsing.
2877905 Hehe, a bit. I was mostly just focusing on the page at that point in time.
Just had to finish this tonight (morning). Ending seemed slightly dark, though still not sure as to what exactly happened. Though Celestia sure seems pissed about the triple penis rape. She made it known she knew they were both at the very least dating. Admitting to allowing Twilight to marry Luna/Nightmare Moon, still not sure who is who. But will follow till last chapter then make final judgement. Now to sleep.
2879391 Oh, I'm sorry, I don't use made up words. They both mean the exact same thing when used in the right context. Glad ya liked it, though.
2879462 Final chapter coming now, and it's both. She has slipped back into Luna's less violent and hateful personality, and everybody refers to her as Luna, but she still looks like Nightmare. The Elements never purged her body.
2880152 pfhfhhhhhh hahahahahahahahaha * busts my ass on the floor as I roll outa my chair and hit my head on my floor "ouch! oh shit bwahahahahahahahahahahahahhhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
That would have been an understandable reaction on Celestia's part, if it wasn't for the fact that Luna and Twilight lived under the same roof for nearly a year, she found out that they were in an intimate relationship together at some point, and she had already given them her consent to be together, get married and have kids. I can still see it happening though. After all, we all know Luna went crazy.
Grats on the 500 Followers, Peps!
This was fun to edit, and even better to read! Twilight x Nightmare Moon, almost as good as Twilight and Luna is!
Triple penetration...?
Well, if it works...
~Skeeter The Lurker
Hawt, want more.
Aww yissss, I've been waiting for this one for a while!
Thanks a lot. Maybe there'll be something worth drawing in this fic ...
very very good and well written need more of this
2876153 2875887 Finale coming out tomorrow~
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2876154
Whoa, have Celestia killed Twilight?
2876201
I find your lack of faith disturbing.
This Is Relly Good MORE Pls
Uh.....wow, okay. This was good, though I would have liked to know what Celestia had apparently done to Luna, other than the banishment of course. It seemed implied at one point that something else had happened.
Twilight was.....well understandable I guess, and also kinda pitiable. Not wanting to harm anyone but not having the strength to resist the urge. Still, I think what they have now is okay, though frankly I don't blame Celestia at all for her reaction.
Honestly, I just hope this all works out without them having to run or such, because I don't believe Luna would have allowed Celestia to do that. Nor do I see Celestia doing anything to her sister while pregnant.
2875878
I saw that too and thought, "This must be read."
2876541 Well, this is an alt universe to one of my alt universes, so that's explained there. As far as what happens next, that'll be revealed tomorrow~
2876548
Yay, got something to look forward to.
I don't know why Luna would tell celestia of what twilight did....unless she has concocted some 10 month plan to destroy her lol which would suck cuz I love the story so far....:) can't wait to see what happens next
Futa is not for me... Thanks for the warning though :3
2876883 Too bad you don't have a story for me to find an inane reason to downvote it for
2876877 Quick question. Do you like Male/Female?
2876925 Well, I didn't downvote because, unlike some people, I am not an asshole... And I am heterosexual male, you ask because...?
2876931 Nah, I ain't worried about the downvote. My thing is, how can you like male/female clop and not like female/female clop with one of them being the male? Unless you just don't like lesbian clop, but even then it's not pure lesbian.
2876941 I dunno, it just seems a bit too weird... It's like she-males; it's too unusual to be attractive. I can see where you're coming from though. A girl with a penis is a guy (with biological exceptions of course) and therefore, futa is technically normal clop. But when I see futa being mentioned, I instantly assume Futa x Futa (therefore Male x Male) and I am not attracted to that. Apart from the futa in your story, I am not a fan of gore/dark themes and your story sounds like it is too dark for me to enjoy, sorry
2876956 Ain't really dark. Outside of the initial rape, the only thing that happens is the violence at the end of the last chapter.
So I had a shitty day today, and I see FutaTwi out of no where and now I'm happy again, dood.
Thanks for that, dood.
2877098 You're welcome
2877110 I noticed that this isn't complete...is there more, dood?
2877112 A final chapter to come tomorrow.
2877158 I'm working on the next chapter of ATFN, but I've got ideas roiling in my head and it's probably gonna be postponed because of this.
You made another Twilight X Nightmare story?
Dang, I have'nt finished the first one...
(We need more emotion iconss)
2877880 Hehe, first one isn't finished yet either. This is my 500 follower special
That's not a warning, that's a god damn sales pitch! Take my money!
2877885 Holy crap, I swear I made that comment two seconds ago.
Fastest. Reply. Ever.
... You magic?
2877888 I like it, but that's not where the idea comes from.
2877895 Warning: Contains copious amounts of your fetish. Heart failure due to overload is a possible side-effect of reading. Use caution when browsing.
2877905 Hehe, a bit. I was mostly just focusing on the page at that point in time.
aww, no happy end? Lumi sad
2878628 it does say it is incomplete
2877114 Another chapter!
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EXCELLENT!
Hope for a good ending.
DAYUM..
Celestia. got. PISSED!
Oh, and congrats on the 500 Followers, Peppy!
2876154
This is nice to hear. I almost had a shit-fit when I finished chapter three.
*wakes up*
*is out of tea*
*no friends on SL*
*loads up FiMFic.net*
*sees this*
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Today's gonna be a good day. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
Just had to finish this tonight (morning). Ending seemed slightly dark, though still not sure as to what exactly happened. Though Celestia sure seems pissed about the triple penis rape. She made it known she knew they were both at the very least dating. Admitting to allowing Twilight to marry Luna/Nightmare Moon, still not sure who is who. But will follow till last chapter then make final judgement. Now to sleep.
2879174 I'll get those fixed when I get home, but the hybrid thing should be pretty obvious. Nightmare is the only one of 'multiple races'.
Also, Twilight is long, not big.
2878899 Thanks!
2878628 Finale coming out in a few minutes~!
2879391 Oh, I'm sorry, I don't use made up words. They both mean the exact same thing when used in the right context. Glad ya liked it, though.
2879462 Final chapter coming now, and it's both. She has slipped back into Luna's less violent and hateful personality, and everybody refers to her as Luna, but she still looks like Nightmare. The Elements never purged her body.
"I never meant- Please, I’m sorry!”
"Oh no, does that mean all the other times I incapacitated and had sex with ponies was rape too?"
2880152
pfhfhhhhhh hahahahahahahahaha * busts my ass on the floor as I roll outa my chair and hit my head on my floor "ouch! oh shit bwahahahahahahahahahahahahhhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
Sweet delicious Twi-rape.
All I can say is DAMN!
Holy crap
FUCK YOU CELESTIA! YOU KILLED MY FAVORITE PONY, YOU FAT BITCH! All in all, im gonna read the next chapter shortly. Great job so far.
Oh HEEEEEELLL Naw You did not just do that....
That would have been an understandable reaction on Celestia's part, if it wasn't for the fact that Luna and Twilight lived under the same roof for nearly a year, she found out that they were in an intimate relationship together at some point, and she had already given them her consent to be together, get married and have kids.
I can still see it happening though. After all, we all know Luna went crazy.